wonderfully written. i really liked the part you added about the green monster.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/03/06
Great story. I liked every part of it. Great Job.  |
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Alrighty! That was great! It's my first time back to the Portkey world and I've started it off with a story I'd bookmarked ages ago. I thouroughly enjoyed this story. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it  |
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That was sweet, much sappier than I had expected but quite sweet nonetheless. I like Bumbling!Harry; it's so very cannon of you to choose that particular aspect of his personality. Ron is, arguably, more mature here than in cannon, but given the distance of year, he's how I imagine post-cannon Ron to be. Bravo on both counts. Fab writing; a fun read. |
Author Feedback: Thanks very much. I wasn't going for sappy, so maybe I failed a bit on that count. But I was going for fluffy, so I guess it was fluffy enough. And I'm glad you thought Ron had matured; that was a major point here, that Ron was mature enough to realize that it was okay for Harry to be interested in Hermione. Thanks again |
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The story is lovely - I like stories about how Ron and Harry are best mates and all. Unfortunately, you used one of my pet peeves: "Gryffindor courage", but that's my problem, not yours. Great piece of work! Thank you for sharing this with us! |
Author Feedback: Thank you Sorry about that "Gryffindor courage" bit. Probably a good thing I decided NOT to call this "Finding His Gryffindor Courage Again"...maybe you wouldn't have read it  |
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Aww! Mush! I love mush! I'm really a great big softy at heart and I really do like this kinda story! It makes me feel good! Whatsmore I always knew that JK wasn't gonna put Harry and Hermione together but that's what Fanfic's about! Changing the future! |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you liked the story. See, JKR can't control what happens after Harry defeats Voldemort, can she??  It's our job to make things right  |
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That was a pretty short story. That was sooo sweet how they got together. 
I give this story Two thumbs up! |
Author Feedback: Not that short - over 3,000 words But yeah, it's a one-shot. I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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JanieBSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/11/05
Ha! Just GORGEOUS! I have the biggest grin on my face! Lovely, lovely little one-shot! Thank you!
JanieB |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much I enjoyed writing this a lot. |
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Oh I liked it. It was ... sweet. He was very shy in this story. Like he should be. Good job.
-Bryana |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I tend to think of Harry as being a lot less self-assured than he was in HBP. But then I think someone was messing with his mind in that book. Anyway I see him as shy about having those kinds of feelings about Hermione, because he doesn't want to mess up things with his female best friend. Thanks again |
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I´m back .....
yah i knew that you did the flipside of Nacey\'s story The Snitch cause you wrote that on the Author's Note, and between you and I you like more the Hermiones point of view cause(it´s a girls POV)not that the other one is not onther my fav. but i like more urs, and thanks it does makes more sence now, i really like both cause they are truly great(thats a little ego boost) so keep it up you are the one of my fav. Authors i even got you on fav. authors so keep it up hope yo read more of you soon . |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much  You're very kind. Don't worry, you'll be seeing more from me. I'm just a slow writer and Real Life tends to get in the way  Thanks again. |
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kgylockSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/05
Very good! A bit of a slow and troublesome start, with details of Ginny, but excellent recovery. |
Author Feedback: Sorry about the Ginny stuff Poor Harry was certainly a hormonal 16-year-old boy then, wasn't he?  At least he realized that HE had been delusional Thanks for commenting. |
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you mean there is long and short version?
cause it does sound ofly familiar to scratching the itch and i thought it was a nother fic.  |
Author Feedback: You're back Yes, there's a short SNITCH (look on my author page) that's only about 5,000 words. I wrote that first. Later, I wrote Scratching the Itch, which is the flipside of Nacey's story The Snitch. I hope that explains things. I know, I wrote 2 stories based on the same drawing. I'm bad that way |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/11/05
Wonderfully written...truly enjoyable read. Loved Ron's "extremely enjoyable" line - too funny. Thanks for such a great one shot! |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reviewing |
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e999Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/11/05
luv story so much, had to review again.
fav line:
"Nah, I mean that goofy grin on your face when you came back -- unless you find pissing extremely enjoyable."
i cracked up. very well written |
Author Feedback: Wow, 2 reviews of a little one-shot fic. Thanks very much. I kind of like that line too |
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Very nice...quiet, calm, sweet. Very fluffy and well written.
Thanks
PS - more please! |
Author Feedback: Thank you. Every now and then I feel the need to write something calm and fluffy. Glad you enjoyed it |
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