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My Stupid Mouth Part II

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paxaurelia
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/01/06
yay! Harry and Hermione kissing is always a good thing! although, I must say that it was really hard to imagine them doing a theatrical entrance like that - crashing through doors, unable to keep theirs hands to themselves, elevators and all. don't get me wrong - I love passion - it just took a moment to imagine.

so we find out if Harry is a virgin or not?? i want to know!

sorry, i need to get to the last segment before it kills me not knowing!
 

Sailor Universe
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/11/05
harry's "stupid mouth" is rather interesting, actually . i'm almost afraid to find out what he's going to say or do next, lol
 

haphazard1
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/11/05
A very nice continuation of this story -- some heat, some humor, and I liked the in-character feel of both Harry and Hermione.
 

nlovewithHP77
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/11/05
This is a really cute story. I am so glad you updated. You are a really good writer and I love how you got Hermione and Harry together. I can't wait to see what the next story brings. The ending was great. Please update soon.
 

MGranger
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/11/05
this is quite cool and fluffy!!!! i really liked it!! thoug i like lengthy stuff this did it for me!! quite cool. great job
 

bryana1029
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/11/05
Hehe. I love his stupid mouth too. Very much indeed. Can't wait for the next part!
-Bryana
 

Azusena
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/11/05
That was awesomw, i really liked it, keep up the awesome work and i shall look forward to the third part!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/11/05
Woo-Hoo! I've been mentioned on Portkey as well! Man, I'm getting to be like famous and stuff. I enjoyed reading this for a second time. I still love the awkwardness the two have at first, and of course the use of the term "minx" got me lauhging. I really do think it's a fun story, and I'm anxious to see what you do with the third part. Maybe some flip-flop-hippity-hop? "Something bout the way the hair falls in your face...
Always,
Fred
 

GPGA
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/11/05
Jaja.. the last four sentences were quite funny! Though this story is very short, is good stuff, pure fluff! Thanks for this second part. We will be waiting for the last one! HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!
 

IslandPrincess1
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/11/05
Okay, Part I was funny, Part II is naughty, hmm, I wonder what Part III is like?
Great!!!
 

Mischiefmanaged86
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/10/05
yay, you continued! I definitely can't wait for part 3!! This one was short but very sweet hehe Great job. Can't wait for the next part
 

Maegmel
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/10/05
Yes Harry has a stupid mouth, but then so do most boys. Oh well who cares?

As I'm sure Hermione would agree they usually taste good! (Not that I would know mind you!)
 

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