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yay! Harry and Hermione kissing is always a good thing! although, I must say that it was really hard to imagine them doing a theatrical entrance like that - crashing through doors, unable to keep theirs hands to themselves, elevators and all. don't get me wrong - I love passion - it just took a moment to imagine.
so we find out if Harry is a virgin or not?? i want to know!
sorry, i need to get to the last segment before it kills me not knowing! |
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harry's "stupid mouth" is rather interesting, actually  . i'm almost afraid to find out what he's going to say or do next, lol |
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A very nice continuation of this story -- some heat, some humor, and I liked the in-character feel of both Harry and Hermione. |
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This is a really cute story. I am so glad you updated. You are a really good writer and I love how you got Hermione and Harry together. I can't wait to see what the next story brings. The ending was great. Please update soon. |
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MGrangerSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/11/05
this is quite cool and fluffy!!!! i really liked it!! thoug i like lengthy stuff this did it for me!! quite cool. great job |
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Hehe. I love his stupid mouth too. Very much indeed. Can't wait for the next part!
-Bryana |
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/11/05
That was awesomw, i really liked it, keep up the awesome work and i shall look forward to the third part! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/11/05
Woo-Hoo! I've been mentioned on Portkey as well! Man, I'm getting to be like famous and stuff. I enjoyed reading this for a second time. I still love the awkwardness the two have at first, and of course the use of the term "minx" got me lauhging. I really do think it's a fun story, and I'm anxious to see what you do with the third part. Maybe some flip-flop-hippity-hop? "Something bout the way the hair falls in your face...
Always,
Fred |
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GPGASigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/11/05
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Okay, Part I was funny, Part II is naughty, hmm, I wonder what Part III is like?
Great!!! |
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yay, you continued!  I definitely can't wait for part 3!!  This one was short but very sweet hehe Great job. Can't wait for the next part |
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MaegmelUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/10/05
Yes Harry has a stupid mouth, but then so do most boys. Oh well who cares?
As I'm sure Hermione would agree they usually taste good! (Not that I would know mind you!) |
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