lauhallSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/05/08
That was really sweet, I totally loved it. You did an excelent job. Congrats  |
Author Feedback: Hi again! Love reading such complimentary reviews!  Thank you again!
Cheers,
Janie  |
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hermy415Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/02/07
wow, that was sooo cute.. I love it.. the wonders of kissing hermione.. very cute.. keep on writing!!1 luv ya!!!
I support h/hr!!!
Go Harmony!!!
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Author Feedback: Thank you very much for your review - I always like to hear about readers enjoying one of my stories...  And don't worry, I'll keep on writing (whenever I get time!) and it'll always be Harry/Hermione stories!
Cheers,
JanieB |
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RiXXSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/11/06
This:
"It was the longest, and shortest, and most softly delicious, absolutely wonderful moment of his life to date. Definitely."
Was an great line As always, you consistently impress me with the way you stories just seem to flow so well, and your dialogue is both interesting and well-written. I especially enjoyed Ron's cluelessness in this, and I thought it was sweet that Harry and Hermione would live together platonically, but he lived elsewhere. That's the way I could see it going, too, if there's no ship resolution after B7.
Great job! |
Author Feedback: Wow ...
Them's very flattering words - thank you very much! Glad you like my Ron - I believe he can be clueless but I don't like to ever write him so that he comes across actually dumb or stupid. I can see Harry and Hermione lviing together platonically, too, without driving each other up the wall. Ron, though... 
Since I never wrote a thing before my stories here at Portkey, I have to say I surprise myself at times!  Though since doing so, I have discovered I absolutely love writing!
Ah yes...Book 7...what will it hold? I believe JKR when she says she always planned for Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione ... it's just that personally, I never picked that from the books - to me, Harry/Hermione was the most obvious relationship (until HBP). ::sigh:: Even if, after Book 7, she ends it with H/G and R/Hr, I will simply see them as "teenage" relationships that will peter out as most do. And THEN Harry and Hermione will realise they're made for each other... Nice to be able to call on my "delusionality"
Thanks again for the great review!
Cheers,
Janie |
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very nice. i liked it. u should think about a sequal. |
Author Feedback: Hi again Adriana!!!
You HAVE been busy reading!! lol!!! A sequel, hey??? I always worry they won't be as funny, you know...
Thanks for the review, you are a true sweetie!!!
Janie xoxo |
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aaaaaaaaawwww!!!!!! i'm not sure what else to say! i have to think of something because that wasn't 10 words, but now i'm past 10, so i'll just say that that was absolutely aborable!!!  |
Author Feedback: I've actually been away (had a FABULOUS holiday!) and after all the unpacking (boring!!!) thought I'd pop into Portkey and I find you've been busy reading some of my one-shots and have been kind enough to review - and say great things! Great way to end a holiday! Anyways, thanks again - I love writing and it's very gratifying when readers let you know they've enjoyed your stories!
Cheers and ciao!
JanieB |
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Oh, my smile is firmly in place. A wonderful story! Just the kind of thing to make any day 10 times better. The end conversation was adorable and I laughed out loud at "Which turned out to be an excellent move. Go Harry." Very lovely and fluffy-fun. Their thoughts were cute and in character. Wonderful! |
Author Feedback: Hi there!
So nice to see you "here"! I had a lot of fun writing this little fluffy story - so glad you loved it too! And thank you so much for reviewing! I'll see you back at "Reunion" when I get around to the review-reply marathon! (which I love! It's like having a chat with old friends!)
Cheers!
Janie |
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ValancySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/09/06
Smile firmly in place!!! (In reference to the last line of the story!) If I haven't mentioned it before, I love the name "The Burning Broomstick!" I also loved the, "Go Harry." You do have quite a talent for the H/Hr romantic fics!  The inner dialog is great, and the way you describe everything is lovely! |
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ashtray101Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/06
`Harry?'
`Yes, Hermione?'
`What's going on?'
`You don't know?'
`I - I don't think so!' Even Hermione could meet her match.
`Don't think, that's important. Just kiss me again.'
`That doesn't sound right…'
`On this, Hermione, you'll have to trust me.'
`Well, I always have before…'
`Don't stop now. Kiss me. Please.'
Omigosh!That was absolutely terific.Write more of these light but oh-so-fun to read fics!How about a daniel&emma fic? haha... kidding. But it'll be really fun to read fics about them. |
Author Feedback: Ah ha! The little JFF Worm!! I didn't "see" you here before this, sorry! Been very busy with that OTHER story as you can imagine! Actually, I don't really mind when those little plot bunnies hop up and plant those niggling little ideas for fluffy one shots in my ear! Don't worry, when I get 'em, I'll write 'em!! Thanks so much for the review and I'll "see" you at "Reunion" on Saturday!
Cheers!
JanieB |
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H_HrFanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/04/06
Very cute, Janie! I just love your stories! I haven't read the long ones yet...but I most certainly will.
Your writing is too much fun not to read as much of it as I can!
Thanks.
xoxo xoxo
Terri |
Author Feedback: Hi Terri!
You are such a sweetie leaving a review - thank you! I actually noticed the other day you've posted a one shot that I will definitely be reading soon - have been absolutely flat chat (and had hubby home sick, and he's now on hols - NO time for moi whatsoever!! ) Anyways, thanks again - you are a dear!
Ciao for now!
Janie xoxoxo |
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This story was wonderful! Fluffy H/HR goodness, with plenty of denial and confusion thrown in, plus a happy ending. Perfect. |
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hehe Your stuff rocks - youre really great! can't wait to read the rest *and review of course* |
Author Feedback: Woh! You're on a roll! (And I'm not working today which is why I'm hanging around Portkey! ) Can't wait to hear what you think of the rest!
Cheers!
Janie |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/12/05
yea,now that someone mention it,i guess a sequel would be good too.yeah,i tottally agree.about the reaction off the public and especially ron unless the secret was only kept between harry n hermione,if ron knows about the secret,yea,im sure alot of people would want to see his reaction.oh,and also harry n hermione opinion.yeah that be a real eye-opener of a seqeul. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/12/05
ewwww.i am not betting *anything*.lol. good story anyway. has some hidden meaning if you reread it a couple of times. but overall it didnt really hit the humour mark.Since your saying this is after all a one shot...(yes it did put a smile on my face but nothing more over the line).I guess it serve its purpose of accomplishing the story but i think if u put more humour along the way,that would be better.nevertheless,im content with this story.i guess it was balanced in the end.anyway,i have read your other one shots and i belive you can do better.oh,and more fluff please.
ps:how was that?call it whatever you want but i say this is carefull flattery depends on how you take it. |
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it was good but you could have done it a bit longer cause you an use so may scenarios 4 them with these plot wich by the way was great |
Author Feedback: Hey you! I know it could've been longer - believe me, most of my stories I could spin out but I have to control myself and one-shots are good practice for my writing self-discipline! Anyways, glad you enjoyed it and thanks again for this review too!
Ciao, ciao!
Janie |
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JGCSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/11/05
Aww...that was soo cute!!
I especially loved the ending...
Seriously though, awesome fic!!
And you even kept Harry and Hermione perfectly in chatacter!
You really really really have to write some more like this!
I absolutely LOVED it!! |
Author Feedback: Oh dear - it's been a while since you reviewed this and I'm usually much quicker off the mark than this - I'm going to use the "Christmas Crazies" as my excuse (and life IS rather crazy at the moment!)
Anyways, thanks so much for your lovely review! I have written a few other one-shots (all romance/humour - that's me, a total romantic who likes to laugh! ). If you get around to reading them, I hope you enjoy them as much.
Cheers!
JanieB |
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