this was beautiful. it puts you into the characters place and that draws you in so well. i'm touched by it.

okay..what did you do to become such a freaking good author??? because i do NOT (i repeat, DO NOT!) know ANYBODY who could write as good as, or better, than you. your stories are the rockingest. mwah xoxo

I have no words for this. This is an incredible piece of fic...it's dark and it's gritty and it's nothing but truth, something written from the heart.

I love that you focused less on the elements of the sex and more on the elements of Ginny's thoughts during it. I especially like the clever usage of the brackets - interesting technique that you pulled off very nicely...

You've generally done an excellent job on this, from the choice of voice (2nd person is rarely used well, and this is a great example) to choice of style.

You, my friend, are a master of the angst. None of that weepy pity nonsense for us, no, we get something much better. It's dark and clean-cut, finite and messy all at once, gritty and nothing but hard truth.

I can't emphasize how much I love what you've done with this. This same plot and idea, put in the hands of a far less capable writer, could turn really, really bad. But thankfully, you've done it more than justice.

Excellent job, and you can bet I'll be looking for more of your work in the future.

With great writer's admiration,
~Misao7

OMG! That was sooooo sweet and sad!! AWWWW!LOL! its a really good oneshot, i really liked it!
-Channy-

Why had I never read this? I don't normally read D/G, but this piece was amazing. I felt so bad for Ginny through it all, and even felt bad for Draco at the end. Great job.

Wonderfully written...very dark and sounds true to the books with the Harry and Ginny angle gone. But definitely sounds like Draco. Thanks for a compelling one shot.

the story was very good can't wait for more i would love to read more

Oh....
that is so sad... but I totally like it, it's a great story, really...
Lynn

this story is really good. it is addicting. Write more!

I would love it if you would write another...(prequel, sequel, anything....please!)

fantastic. brilliant. that was one of the best uses of second person perspective I've ever seen... truly great story.

It's a good story. i enjoyed reading it. i give it two thumbs up

WOW! Nice work. Love to read more on this subject. Waiting for more.

Aw, that kinda hit my heart a bit hard at the end there -- suddenly I felt for Draco, such a poppet.

I liked it though, overall I mean, it's nice reading a fic in that perspective, you don't get to often, really -- most find them a little tricky to write.

I heart this though, it is very pretty.

i really like this, well done writing from ginnys conscience. Very intense writing, makes me want to know the backgroud - like is this set before/after the end war? a few more details would be good - to place the story, but otherwise - really good, keep it up!