omg! that was just too cute! it was kinda silly...but i love these kind of stories! thank you for granting me a little break from my homework! your writing is fully appreciated by me and my breaks! lmao!

what?...ok...thats...err....abit wierd....ok,i am speechless......wait,what i mean is i dunno what to say.....bloody hell,why did i even review this anyway...

“Hermione... I-I...have to get my cheese of the month shipment!”
i burst out laughing
no joke.

Cute! Trust Hermione to come up with a way for Harry to say exactly what she needs...well, not exactly, but close enough! I liked the fluff... always a good thing, H/Hr fluff!

uhh... love only has one syllable... other than that, that was really cute! What is the cheese of the month thing off of? I've heard it somewhere... anyways, good story!

That's cute! So very sweet, and I can imagine Harry having a hard time saying "I love you" to someone. Keep up the good work!

I vole this too! Haha, actually, love is just one syllable not two, but I'm being a smarty-pants...

That was very cute. Nice way of thinking of "vole" instead of "love." I can see Harry really doing it. Lovely job.

Not to bad i only wish that it was alittle longer

I like this, very enjoyable, nice. Everyones been in the same situation, except the evil wizard trying to kill them part anyway, hits home to everyone. well done!

That was one of the most adorable pieces of work I have ever read! I am so saving the link!

That's so cute!

I absolutely adore how they substituted vole for love. Really adorable, keep up the good work.

That was funny.I hope thst you can keep up the type of work witch is great by the way.Have fun when you write.

This was too cute! I absolutely loved this! Hah...vole. Sorry, I voled this story.

aw! so cute -
you should have put this under humor and Romance but anyway, very good