DragenSigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 28/04/08
Great chapter mate, oh the fucking ass Snape taking One hundred points from Harry and only twenty from his own house, oh what an ass. |
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DragenSigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 28/04/08
Another great chapter mate, I love how the story is going and I can't wait to see what happens next.
I like how much Harry and Hermione is getting closer, I can't wait to see what you going with it. |
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DragenSigned | Chapter : 12 | Date : 28/04/08
Great chapter mate, I like how Harry rescued Hermione, shmae he got hurt so badly. Keep up the great work mate, as I would like to see what happens next. |
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DragenSigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 28/04/08
I wonder why Peeves is so afeid of Harry, he is just a first year. |
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DragenSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 28/04/08
Another great chapter mate, I do like how the story is going and I ccan't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work. |
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DragenSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 28/04/08
Oh the ass Dumbledore, even after finding out how Harry has been treated, he still would send him back there, for what, the bloody Blood Wards?? There are other ways to protact Harry. |
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DragenSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 28/04/08
Oh great chapter mate, I like the new skill of Harry's and I can't wait to see what else he may get. |
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DragenSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/04/08
Great start to the story mate, I like the start of the rewrite and can't wait to see what you have planed next. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 24 | Date : 07/04/08
The idea of using muggle weapons is totally genius. If I was fight dark wizards that thought they were above muggles, I would uses explosives. I mean I highley doubt any of them would know what a grenade is. They would look on curiously while it ticks off... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 07/04/08
I think nurses are told to look for abuse when treating a child... So she could probably report her suspitions?
SWEET! Spider sense! |
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great end to a great beginning, I am going to look around for the next fic, hopefully you continued it. It's been two years so I would expect something from you. I hope you wouldn't give up on writing fics because this one is absolutely fantastic. Don't give up. If you haven't posted a new fic then I suggest you give a sequel a try before quitting. again I loved the story and I would recommend this to any and all harry potter friends h/hr fans or not. have fun and good luck with any future endeavors you might have.
Loved it,
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Author Feedback: just read your reviews. Thank you very much. i will continue these fics but i have a few weeks left in my last year of school.
Again thank you and please enjoy my next one |
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great end to a great beginning, I am going to look around for the next fic, hopefully you continued it. It's been two years so I would expect something from you. I hope you wouldn't give up on writing fics because this one is absolutely fantastic. Don't give up. If you haven't posted a new fic then I suggest you give a sequel a try before quitting. again I loved the story and I would recommend this to any and all harry potter friends h/hr fans or not. have fun and good luck with any future endeavors you might have.
Loved it,
LL |
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coolest chapter yet, besides the troll of course. I like how harry is progressing still with his judo practicing. This is getting very interesting and is very easy to read, upon that it's really well written, really well...
LL |
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it's definitely a cliff-hanger...I like the new change of events. it is quite refreshing to have a darker story |
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OMG...I love this so much. I want to read this more... I have two weeks of homework to do and I will fail my classes if I don't it...but this is so good I will read forever. |
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