I'm sorry, I had to stop reading after this chapter. It's just a bit too unrealistic for me. Too many babies, all from teenagers far too young. This seems too much like a teenager's romantic notion of what falling in love and having babies is all about, and paints a rather soap opera type view.

You do have a talent for storytelling, but I think the plot needs to grow a bit.

Hi,

First, I want to say that I have thoroughly enjoyed your story. It is wonderful to sit down for hours of a nice story, not loaded with angst.
Though the number of teen pregnancies are deeply disturbing.

As I read along, though, a bit of the grammar keeps bugging me. too/to are often mixed up and using too much 's for plural words - for example if you have two Weaselys in a room, it shouldn't be with an 's. Sorry - it's a huge pet peeve for me. (hope you aren't offended... but it's something to learn from)

Thanks for writing a wonderful story, that is fun to curl up with and get lost in.

Very great story. I have been avoiding homework and chores for half a week now trying to finish this. I really like your choice of couples, and I kept wondering if Ginny and Draco would end up together, after all they had gone through. Awesome ending. I cant wait to read the second.
Excellent fanfic.

After reading this story about eighteen million times, I finally realized Marissa\'s intials were MGM, which I thought was slightly amusing....

this wee it of this chapter was sooo sweeeeet!!!! i did a masssive aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw!! whn i read it!! lol i loved it soo much!!


\"Draco moved Marissa slightly and she opened her eyes. He propped her up on his leg which was crossed over his other knee and looked at her. She was filling out and getting the little rolls in her arms, legs and under her chin, but it still amazed even him that someone he helped make had his exact shade of blue eyes and was so cute. Marissa stared at him, locking her gaze with his and she wiggled for a minute then smiled up at him. Unable to resist he smiled back and ran a finger down her cheek then grasped her tiny hand.\"

really its sooooo sweeeeeet!!

this is soo great im really just sending this to add to my favs its that good

geezzz this story is so good. its like 2:30am. ur story is making me lose sleep b/c i want to keep reading.

the birthstone for august isn\'t green. its a diamond. but anyway i love the story

this is a great story! i liked it a lot that i told my friends about it and they read it and told me they liked it to!

I love this fanfiction. it is really good. i can\'t wait to read the next one.

I love this story! It's my second time reading it, and I find that I'm enjoying it as much as the first time I read it. Good job and keep up the good work!

i absolutely loved your story it was really good. but i was kinda confused, d/g's triplets i thought they were all boys, are they??
anyways good job!! im starting the sequel now cant wait!

this is reallly shaping up to be a good story im impressed with how well you are writing

this is reallly shaping up to be a good story im impressed with how well you are writing

this is reallly shaping up to be a good story im impressed with how well you are writing