That was really adorable! I like the moments you chose, they make clear that it doesn't take much to be happy with the one you love |
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It's nice. Not very remarkable moments, but perhaps memorable for Harry, because they were his perfect moments. These were times out of anyone's limelight, simple times, sharing simple pleasures and simply understanding one another. It takes very little, and no more than that thank you very much, for Harry to feel right at home. I really liked how that came through in the writing. |
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luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/01/06
aww, that was so cute!!! what's up with the "he liked that" haha  |
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That story, like all of yours, was wonderful. It had the beginging of their relationship and everything, it was sweet. I am off to the next story now, expecting nothing less than it ot be filled with warm fuzzies. |
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I hope you don't mind the influx of reviews that are going to be going into your inbox. You're quite a good author from the stories I've read so far...and I'd thought I'd let you know! At any rate, I like this story in terms of its innocence, for once, Harry really is just a normal boy. |
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I loved it.I loved how nervous he was to ask her out, so adorable.Exellent work.
~Rach |
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That was so sweet! It's stuff like this that makes surfing through hundreds of fanfics worth it. |
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That was very sweet. I like how you didn't make it too cliched and had Cho getting all jealous. Great job! |
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Orange crush!  Thanks for the utter dismissal of it  Nice and fluffy: just the way I like it |
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This was absolutely adorable! I absolutely loved it. It was so cute and sweet and simple. It was lovely really. |
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You never fail to impress me with your stories. You just pop one good one out after the other. That sotry was so simple, because they felt so comfortable aroudn each other. Great job.
-Bryana |
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puck_ncSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/10/05
Loved it. That felt very much like Harry to me, and the little jabs at the shipping world were funny. Thanks for sharing it! |
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neniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/10/05
You've really hit the nail on the head when you wrote about Harry and Hermione's relationship!
I found this story very cute and their emotions weren't exaggerated .. it was perfect 
But then again, your stories are always great!
I can't wait for more stuff from you =)
Keep up the great work
 neni =)  |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/10/05
"Absurd, cliched quality" - how right you are! But you are making fun of it at the same time, that's why this is something special. Also, your writing style is quite remarkable, all these anaphoras, and the rhythm of speech - very well done, indeed. |
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LoupDeNoirUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/10/05
Very sweet, very cute, just a perfec ,little bit of fluff that made me smile and chuckle the whole time. Very good to know HBP didn't kill all the good ole' fasion fluff-for-fluff-for-sakes  just lovely |
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