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wow, that was short. i can't wait to read the next one.
why is that question such a typical guy question? now i have to wonder if Harry is! i always hope that he is and that he will save himself for Hermione.
at least he has a good excuse for letting his stupid question go. if he would only explain it to her, i think she'd understand - at least I would! |
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oi... I'm glad that they are close enough 'friends' that she didn't smack him... actually... nvm, lol. shor and... sweet, goofy, w/e, take your pick  |
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That all-too-familiar feeling of "what the HELL did I just say?!?!?"...yep, I know it well.  Nice short fic, and I loved the bit about Harry realizing his brain would end up frying. |
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anjSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/11/05
that was funny.... harry's so tactless...
well, it was a nice story...
keep it uP!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/11/05
Funny and a bit silly too but over all very nice |
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wow, that was the shortest thing I have ever read on this site. |
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What a question Mr Potter! Brilliant! On to read Part II.   |
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GPGASigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/10/05
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Zephyr892Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/05
HAHAHAHA... im sorry all i could do was laugh and smile at this short story...
Excellent job, really, excellent job |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/05
Aha! So there will be more parts! Looks like Ellen and I got our wish. Any hints as to what the next song will be? Well, whatever it is, I look forward to it. How is the weather down there? I'm down to 11 days and hope it's nice while I'm down there. Anyway, looking forward to the next story, whatever it might be!
Always,
Fred |
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HHr4evrSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/05
It would be really nice to have a sequel to this...it was just way to short. But cute.
~Lauren~ |
Author Feedback: Since a lot of people are asking for follow-ups to this little fic, I've decided to make My Stupid Mouth three parts, but with a few differences; it'll be PG-13 and up.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Glitterfairyxoxo |
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This story was really cute. I like how you connected the song with it. I love John Mayer. Can't wait to see what you write next. |
Author Feedback: John Mayer is brilliant, isn't he?
Thanks for reviewing! 
~Glitterfairyxoxo |
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A bit personal for a second date, but it was cute and well written. |
Author Feedback: Thanks!
~Glitterfairyxoxo |
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haha the whole thing made me smile while i was reading. You should totally continue this ::wink:: Good job though |
Author Feedback: Since a lot of people are asking for follow-ups to this little fic, I've decided to make My Stupid Mouth three parts, but with a few differences; it'll be PG-13 and up. 
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
~Glitterfairyxoxo |
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Might I suggest a slight twist to that ending?
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“I'm a virgin.”
She looked up, meeting his rather shocked gaze, and smiled that sweet, shy smile that drove Harry crazy.
***Then her smile developed a touch of a smirk and the twinkle in her eyes that warned him he was in trouble appeared before she added, "Of course, one never knows when that's going to be subject to change..."
It took a second for her meaning to sink in, but when it did all conscious thought skittered to a complete halt. After a moment he felt his brain starting to work again as he tried to come up with a response.***
“Well, err, all right then,” Harry ***finally*** said, and he grinned.
Maybe having a stupid mouth wasn't such a bad thing.
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I always figured Hermione for having a bit of a wild side that only the man she loved would ever get to see...
Fenris
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Author Feedback: Oh, my God, best review yet! Bravo and major props to you! That was very very amusing. Totally loved your little twist.
Anyways, thanks very much for the review and laugh. Look out for part two and three of this story, you might just get what you've been hoping for.
~Glitterfairyxoxo |
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. Thanks for this really cute story!!