are you going to finish this? because i would like you to. seriously. you write so well, i want to know what is going to happen next. PLEASE?!
that would be lovely.
melissa
acoustics
pounding_silence@yahoo.com

lets see....is this complete? i dare say NOT. wow, this is a very serious fic. i'm stuck to it though even though i've already cried a few times. i hope i'm not sobbing at the end of this. hmmmm, you haven't updated in AWHILE. whats that all about? i want to see the end of this. did hbp stop you? pity. really, pity.
melissa
acoustics
pounding_silence@yahoo.com

lets see....is this complete? i dare say NOT. wow, this is a very serious fic. i'm stuck to it though even though i've already cried a few times. i hope i'm not sobbing at the end of this. hmmmm, you haven't updated in AWHILE. whats that all about? i want to see the end of this. did hbp stop you? pity. really, pity.
melissa
acoustics
pounding_silence@yahoo.com

You never fail to deliver on the angsty emotion of these characters. I like the bond developing with Ron and Luna and I'm so relived that Harry and Ron are okay.

I hope your Harry's final fight with Voldemort does not parallel his mothers. I am so rooting for them all to make it through.

Pam

i need ten words to get a chapter alert, so heres my excuse of a responce/review...

This story just got even more interesting. It's very angsty and heartbreaking. I love that Neville and Luna are now with them. But poor Luna! Each chapter just pulls at my heartstrings.

I really look forward to your next update.

Pam

aw, moments like that (and, well, every moment in the "real" harry potter) make me love ron...

This is so...I don't want to say "pretty", but it really is my first reaction. Your writing is pretty. All the scenes are set up perfectly in my head, all the characters are right, it's heartbreaking and so lyrical.

So in short: I love it.

She didn't promise him! Oh no!!
Please let nothing happen to her.
Please update soon

Wow. How heartbreaking. Your ability to bring emotion to the written word is wonderful. I feel the grief. I feel Harry and Hermione's need to reaffirm life.

Pam

wow.I got teary eyed.I feel so bad for Ron and the Weasleys.I love every chapter so far, can't wait for more.

~Rach

Wow! This is so well written and full of emotion! Great job! Hurry and update ASAP please! I love it!

usually sex scenes are all about the heat and feeling it, but this one seems more about.. the needing of it? they love each other, and i think that's what made this scene amazing.
and i'm sorry i dont make sense, haha.

This story is phenomenal - definitely one of the best I've read on PK in a while. When I read it, the story is truly tugging at my heart - I can't wait to read more!

good, good. cant wait for next part. blah, blah, blah, blah.