It was really sweet, I'm still wondering about te details though, how had she betrayed his trust? that sort of thing, still good though, just a little short for my liking.

Aww that was wonderyful! Great job!!! Although I didn't stop to see the One Tree Hill episode.... I mean, how can I say no to spoilers?? Haha, keep up the awesomeness. (this is the second review because I forgot to add to faves, sorry)

Aww that was wonderyful! Great job!!! Although I didn't stop to see the One Tree Hill episode.... I mean, how can I say no to spoilers?? Haha, keep up the awesomeness.

Loved this story. I read I think two of your fics, and I've been looking through the nicer-rated ones [I'm sorry, I can't handle smut =P] and this was one of the first I found and I absolutely *loved* this story. Especially since you don't get what's going on right away, right?

And it's good that you didn't have a makeoutscene at the end, because it probably would've ruined the effect.

Loved this, even though I'm sounding repetitive now. oO

ahh i love this story so much.. i was thinking about it last night b4 i went to bed.. it's is probably one of the best one-shot lily and james fanfics on this site.. completely! great job
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kaci

err... i might have missed it, but what exactly was it that lily "blabbed" or whatever? i'm glad james eventually "came around" though
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and go lily for totally punching that girl's face in! that had to be a highlight right there

That was so like great! Im so mad that I missed that one show!!! but one Q...what did lily do to get on james' bad side? well seems that I'll never know...so just to say it one more time...I like LOFF the story

OH!!! That's so SWEET!! That really is!!! You're a great writer!... But... I found a mistake...

“Perfectly fine. I'm finishing something I've got to turn in before lunchtime,” Lily muttered, trying to keep her voice even and apathetic. Her hand was shaking so she tried to hide it by writing nonstop. More than once, she'd worn a whole in the parchment because she was writing so hard.

The "whole" is supposed to be "hole"... sorry, but I pick things out like that!

Miss Mady

oh my~ i love this! It's excellent. I have never seen one Tree Hill but I love this story it's one of the best short-fics I read... Even though it was like a one-shot and stuff.. i still felt the whole thing was really romantic and moving.. I am going to add this story under Reccomendations too!
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Kaci

You are an awesome writer! I loved this story! ^__^
And personally I think it's better without the snog scene. That would have been a little much. =/

didnt understand some of it...maybe bcuz i just had bad reading skills haha but i liked it

didnt understand some of it...maybe bcuz i just had bad reading skills haha but i liked it

OMG!! Naley all the way!!! OMG, Nathan and Haley are totally adorable. Damn you Chris for trying to break them up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was short and sweet. Very good. I've never watched One Tree Hill, but I'm glad you do. Otherwise I wouldn't have gotten to read that bit. A little making out scene wouldn't have been so bad though...but you could always write a little more. lol. Keep up the good work.
-Bryana

HARRY POTTER rocks! ONE TREE HILL rocks! Two things that are absolutely wonderful put together? AWESOME =D I love it. Will you be writing more like this?