i have to ask - the last line - is this harry that is speaking, because obviously to me it seems that either would do this. man, your fics are so captivating. what is this - streamline writing? i forgot the right term. where we have someone saying whats going on while we hear their thoughts and there is some narration but not a lot. WOW. poor hermione. man i love your fics - SO SAD! but i could so see this happening, sometimes hope just isn't enough after you see so much death and wrongness and cruelty. no one can really say - you can survive it if you haven't been through it. amazing. you are such a good writer. sure you make me cry a lot but that just shows how GOOD you are.
well done!
melissa
acoustics

Aw, what an angsty ending. Still so incomplete, but I can sense why you stopped it there anyway.

is this a companion piece to broken or is broken the companion piece to this?

I don't think I could call this sweet but I will anyway... sweet. You've got a thing for the second person narrative don't you?
It's always cool.

wow. I totally liked the whole 2nd person approach... It was very in-your-face, but not in a bad way... I kind of want to say it was sterile, but I don't mean that in a bad way, either. I enjoyed it. 2 .

Steph

Oooh...this is great!! Hope there is more to it. I want to know who the guy is, boyfriend, fiance, husband??