VanillaSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 15/03/06
Wow, this story is beautifully written but terribly sad. I can really feel Hermione's pain, espeacially at the end of the last chapter. I really wish you would write a sequel. I would like to know what happens. Does Harry return or does he die? The thought of Hermione living the rest of her life with this torture breaks my heart. I need to know what happens!    You're a very talented writer being able to take your readers through that emotional journey. Fantastic job and I look forward to reading more of your stories! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 19/10/05
Confused...Did Harry die? Anyways, good so far, not what I expected, but good! |
Author Feedback: NO. He definitely did not die. He left. It's pretty clear in the story. |
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kool this is great but a bit confusing. are you going to have more chapters? did harry die or leave and is tonks dead or sick? kewl story though. thumbs up to you. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/10/05
OMG! that made me almost cry. It's like you can feel Hermione's pain! and hear her beg. oh gosh, that's good. |
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 19/10/05
Interesting. Really depressing but good! Is Harry coming back? Poor Tonks. |
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tabitooUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 19/10/05
Hope yoou continue. Bitterness doesn't suit Hermione at all. Nice story. |
Author Feedback: The story is actually finished. There were only three short parts two it. And in this case, biterness does suit Hermione because you have to take into account what she's been through - you know? |
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I like this story; it's well-written. But, it's very depressing. And some of the time, I'm not really sure what's going on. Oh well, I still like it anyway.
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So... Does that mean Harry died?? and Hermione did too? i dont exactly understand... |
Author Feedback: No. Harry did NOT die. It doesn't say anywhere in the story that he died. He left because he thought it was safer that way for everyone else. Hermione didn't die; if you pay attention to the end she passed out and Ron carried her to bed. |
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LizieUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 19/10/05
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Author Feedback: Hi Lizie. Sorry to tell you, this story is finished. There were only three small parts to this. |
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LizieUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 19/10/05
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 19/10/05
hey hey-
I like where this is going, keep it up!!! The only thing I dislike about it is that the chapters are a little short. But hey, it's alright, I know what it's like to have only so many thoughts that belong in one chapter, and the rest belong in the next ones. Keep up the good work!!!!
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Oh my... damn... cool!!! I was getting worried there for a second. But I have to ask, what's the big deal with Hermione about Malfoy... oh wait, nevermind. Cool fic!
Sorry about the double post earlier. |
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Now that I didn't expect, but should of. I really like how Hermione acknowledges the shaky foundations of their friendship. I love her anger at Ginny. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. Not everyone thought that scene suited Hermione, but I felt it suited the Character I was building perfectly. |
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Wow, the way you handled second person is great, I love the flashbacks.
I'm not too fond of Hermione being left behind... but shall hold out judgement. |
Author Feedback: You know, after reading this review again, I think I might have changed my mind and decided to work on more than three parts. I'll think about it tomorrow at work. |
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