lotrgirl2Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/11/07
do you guys like that really exist? where can i find one??? how much do they cost??? i\'m sure wal mart has a few. hahaha, great story, i really loved it. |
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Woot! I just LOOOOOVED that one! It's amazing, and those good guys are so rare. But the ones that exist are absolutely brilliant, and they deserve thanks. I thought the fic was awesome, especially cuz James really was one of those guys.  Thanks
Moon |
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CathyDSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/09/06
Really enjoyed reading this story too. It's just as nice as the 'Ten Things' one. Great job -again, with the little drabbles that fit so nicely with the list of things. This was a very sweet fic, thanks.  ~Cat |
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Nezy4evaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/06/06
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FeleshaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/04/06
Holy cow! My heart is, like, FLUTTERING! Wow!  You just gotta love this feeling, eh? Ha, ha. Great story! This story is probably the best one that I have ever read!!! |
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That is so cute and so sweet. I liked the teddy! Every guy needs to read that  but then most guys don't read - grrrr
Nicely done, keep writing & I'll keep reading
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you're not the only one who "seriously like this story." i love how james always managed to be there, to always be what lily needed, and put her first. and in a way, that might be might hopeless romantic heart asking for a little *too* much out of life. that was really sweet, though |
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lilyfan16Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/01/06
o cute, i thought this is good.. i liked how you wrote it where they aren't a couple yet,.. it makes it way better! great job!
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Hey! Every time I read a good story, I come right down the the "other stories by this author" and then realise that it's YOU! *channeling caveman* You write good story! I write review!
Good work, excellent as usual. I love the interludes between the story, although I have to admit that I was kind of hoping that it would lead up to Lily's final thoughts when she was protecting Harry against Voldemort - you made quite a large deal out of "to every guy who said that he would die for her" and "to every guy who actually would" - I really think perhaps you could write another 2500 words and work in their death, and her thoughts while Voldy attacked. Perhaps her thoughts in the interim between when she was frantic for James's safety, and when she realised that he was dead - protecting her and Harry.
Rock on. |
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Lils-xUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/12/05
Look, I'm really sorry to tell you this, but i almost cried reading this.
God, it is PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can't remember a fic better - and THIS is a compliment, because I assure you i heve read a LOT of fanfictions - a LOT means a LOT.
I don't know if it was better the comments in between or the stpry itself. I can only say that you got right in your measures - it is fluffy, without being boring, it is naughty, with out being porn, it is perfect, without being fake
Perfect
I mean it
and I REALLY almost cried, which is impressive.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/12/05
oh my goodness. that was bloody fantasic. james was the perfect gentleman and there seriously needs to be more of those running around this world. the list was magnificent. good work. keep it up. |
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interesting approach you've got some spunk(just made it up)going on(funky writing?) |
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FireEyes7Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/11/05
I loved it!! It was awesome!! You did a great job! |
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Thats such a cute story..lol
Thanx a bunch for writing, and I really enjoyed all your other stories!!
-Cm |
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MokuSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/11/05
Awww! That's so utterly adorable! I love these fluffy adorable fics. Honestly, there should be more L/J stories out there. Thanks, I love your work! Keep writing. XD *hugs* |
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