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Book_bug
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/08/06
Sweeter than usual D/G fics. And I like that. But could you write an epilogue for this one? An "after the wedding/honeymoon" type? Like you did for "Bittersweet"?
 

hatebelow
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/01/06
i like this i think. it has an excellent plot but the time span may be a bit too short as is the fic if you pull out the song. but i like it. very good song jewel is pretty good
 

Raie
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/11/05
Whew! Nice one. Looking forward to reading more of you work. Keep it up!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/11/05
wow. that was really good. and i love the song. it was great. this story was very well written and yeah. i ed it
 

t a s H a_x
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/10/05
Ooh-er Missus.

THis was lovely...Strange, I'm also writing a lil ficcy to this song though it is a tragic one - hehe I just revel in tragic romance *hangs head* ah well.

I think your way is beautiful too. Very sweet.
Author Feedback: thank you. ...i tried to do the sad thing, but i just couldn't. i'm just an optimist at heart.
i look forward to your version, then.
 

radcliffeluvslave
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/10/05
This was adorable! I loved it! It was so heartfelt and sad. It was wonderful at the end when they found each other again at the end and found that they were in love. I loved it! Brilliant! Keep up the fabulous writing!
Author Feedback: thank you so much for reviewing! ...i'm so happy that what i set out to put on paper came across so well that people can understand what i was trying to do. thank you.
 

MalfoysLitteGirl
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/10/05
Fantasic! That was beautiful, you wrote this really well..i was suprised, i thought it would've been difficult to write a story to go with this song, but you've made it seem so simple, and yet so elegant and complicated at same time, great job.
Author Feedback: i'm really glad you liked it. ...i find a lot of my inspiration from music and this song just jumped out at me as a d/g song. thank you so much for reviewing!
 

ardelis_fari
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/10/05
oh, this was so good! the way you describe things makes it sounds so real and believable. congrats on your first story! you should definitely write more!
Author Feedback: thank you so much! especially for reading this and taking time to review it! now i understand why so many authors want reviews... such warm fuzzies!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/10/05
Hey, this was really good. But I think this fic should be rated PG 13. It doesn't have anything bad to where it would be considered "NC 17" or even R. Just letting you know. But other than that, this is a really good fic!
Author Feedback: thank you for being the first to review. ...when i submitted this for my author application they told me i might want to up the rating for the language and content. based on tv/movies i think it would also be a pg-13, but hey, better safe than sorry, right? thank you, though, for you compliment and taking time to review!
 

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