Hello,

Excellent Story...... however I feel that you ended this story far too quickly for it to be considered 'finished'. One second H/Hr are having a fight then the next second they're getting married??

Harry didn't even say those famous words, 'I love you', or anything resembling that to Hermione. Overall great story but you managed to completely lose me in the last chapter.....

nice start to the fic, good detail and a start to the plot. Great work.

This is a good story, and I know I've read it before. (In fact I remember who the "red-haired man" is.) I'm going to finish it later, though, so I'm adding it to my favorites.

Thanks for posting, and keep up the great work!

Whew... finally finished. This was really quite good. I really enjoyed it. I think I knew ahead of time, what Percy was really looking for (maybe once I knew that he wasnt the one who got to Hermy's family). But I didnt know how he would've gotten there, or why. The story you told to get us there was gripping. I was really holding my breath, with hermione, while the dementors were swooping, waiting for Harry to come and save the day (I new he would, but I was starting to get anxious!). My only issue is that at first it seemed that they went from Herms needing space to the engagement announcement: it was after his birthday that all this happened, and then the engagement was announced in September. But, I guess once Harry knew he loved her, and Hermy knew Harry wasnt just feeling guilty/grattitude, then there wasnt much to stop them. would have loved a little more fluffiness in that last chappy, but never the less, well done!

Wow... it's gonna be a bit tough to be annoyed at Hermione after this. How sad. And the sister? Wow... where'd she come from? I dont mind this at all, as a plot twist. It's very interesting. I cant wait to see where this goes, and how Harry/Hermione go forward from here.

OOOOOO... she didnt just go to the loo! She actually ditched him??? to me, that's unforgivable. She made a promise to Harry after Ron died, to always be there for him. I'm a little upset with her for leaving Harry. I hope when she does return, Harry is too. LOL

Intriguing... So there really is a red-haired man that is haunting Hermione? She didnt imagine that person who was outside the house in France. Hmmmm....

I'm a little confused here. I'm not sure, but it seems like Harry/Hermione just apparated away from the Burrow, leaving behind Molly, a stunned Fluer, and a bleeding and dying Ginny????? And there are Death Eaters still there??? This just doesnt seem right. Harry and Hermione run, and leave the others behind, and dont do anything to get the two victums help? This seems WAAAYYY out of character for them. Outnumbered or not, they would have stayed and helped until help came, or they would have taken others with them.

Also, big (IMO) cannon mistake here. you say, regarding the scene in HBP where Harry casts Sectasempra on Draco:

"He could have killed Draco in that bathroom; he would have been sixteen and a coward who had attacked his victim unprovoked in the school bathroom just because he did not like him."

Unprovoked??? Reread that scene, 'cause Draco was in the process of casting an unforgivable on Harry at that point (and this followed several curses fired, by each, started by malfoy). He had tried to cast the crucio on him. That is hardly unprovoked, and certainly NOT because he "just didnt like him". There was also no mention of Harry's father being struck by it in his pensieve. Now, maybe you've added that yourself, but it just seems out of place.

Besides these points, I'm enjoying this story, and I'm now dying to know where Hermione went! Poor Harry. I'm betting she's just gone to the loo (I hope). But where was she going with her trunk packed?

WOW - that was quite the angsty story! I've read this and your The Last of the House of Black. Both are incredible stories and both are totally different.

You have a real talent. I'm going to print out your HP and the Knights of Walpurgis next.

I'm not big on one-shots but have enjoyed your writing so much, Ill check those out too.

What a brilliant story! You actually made me cry when I thought Hermione had died - I couldn't believe it. Ron dying was sad too *sniff* - and even Draco Malfoy. Poor guy died when looking after a kid he didn't even love. The story was full of suspence, tension, and was generally a great read - before reading the last chapter I will admit I found it depressing... I just couldn't see anyway out of the nightmare.

Thank you for giving me a day of great reading!

excellent chapter really gud one but still gotta move on to next one to see how it plays out carry on

I had to go to after this chapter too.
Bastard, no great story.

hmmmmm. i think im speechless, what a chapter! so now i am continuing on into the awseome story plot you created!

ttfn

yea you were right the words that come to my lips are WTF!!! and that was a really good bit of writing i had no clue.

good job

ok im now continuing and ur right that was like a "naughty ending"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

hmmmmm that was imteresting. now im curious and will continue reading.