That was beautiful. I loved it! The way you described Hermione in Harry's perspective was original and very sweet. 10/10!

Awesome ficlet, my dear. Amazing imagery and detail. I am constantly amazed the way you write such deep, engrossing stories, although I'm certainly glad you do.

Keep up the great work!

*HUGS!*
Jay

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Aww I liked it. It was a little different and a bit short but I still liked it . I thought it was short but to me it didn't seem too short, it ended at a good point.

VERY SWEET. YOU KNOW THE MEANING OF FOREVER, NOT EVERYONE DOES. KEEP UP YOUR WRITING IT'S VERY GOOD. IT KEEPS ME ENTERTAINED.

I made sure to log in before I read this. I always read without logging in, then I want to comment- but can't. Anyway, this was very light, and colorful. The mood you set is magnificant, and it's all dreamlike (seeing how it's a dream most of the time, that's good.) The imagery you use really brings to 'light' the emotions of the characters.

Interesting. Wasn't quite sure what to expect, but I wasn't expecting that to be a dream. I liked the mood you created. It was like Harry... and yet it wasn't, in a way.

You're a very talented writer. I mean it - I mean, some writers just have good ideas, but don't really have the talent to follow through with it. You've got the talent to make this ficlet explode with emotion. Thanks so much - this was wonderful.

Lovely, absolutely love the comparison between Hermione and the firelight and how she is there watching out for him.

ok, now i feel really stupid.
I got an alert from PK telling me that you've written something so wihtout really reading the summary i started to read it.
That being said, i just read the summary and you've learly stated that it's HArry. Sorry about that..in my defense, it's early in the morning....

Take care
Sheryl

*feeling much more sane now*...
Hey Terri,
You know, after reading the title, till you mentioned brown eyes i thought it was Hermione cause of the title..hehe...
Well, i thought this was a very well written story with great imagery.
gotta go get ready for school.
Take care and keep it up!!!
Have a great weekend.
Sheryl

Wow, that was really beautiful. I swear I could picture this happening, the images you painted were so incredible. This was really wonderful. H_HrFan, are you a writer besides these? You really seem like you could be. You write very well, and if you aren't a writer, you should be. Great work!

Wow, such eloquent writing. Not to many first person narratives out there. This was done excellently. I especially love the imagery. Thanks for sharing.

Awwwww... Ter-bear! LOL You let S.P. read it and not me? I think I'm hurt!!! LOL I loved it as always. You do a very good job with the first person, just like you do in the third person. The description of the flame was beautiful as was the bit at the end between h/hr.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us! It was fantastic! *cough*update discovery*cough* Anyway, thanks again, luv!

HUGS!!!

CEWBO.... LOL

I totally loved this H&Hr fic. Pure cuteness. Keep the great work ^_^!