wowsers i loved this! hopefully this isnt it... cause i never called a story beautiful but this really was. keep up the good work n write moreee~!

Wow. Wow. That was just so beautiful...I don't know what to say. You would expect thatt to happen to Lily, but then again, you would think that she would be confident. Amazing. Just Amazing.

holy crap! i love it. is there another loverly chapter coming?? please?

James is sooo noble. I think they are a cute couple. Excellent way of setting the story. Hope you do a great job.

was that it? it shouldn't be. poor lily. her mom's so evil. and petunia. and everyone. stupid humans.

Evil James. How dare he leave her alone. Even though she was with a professor.

Now, I'm confused. Which year is it? I know at the top it says 1st year.... But... umm... yeah... it doesn't seem to make much sence to me by being first year. Although it would explain why she can't fly...

lol cute.. i think it would have been better though to just leave ouyt the last line.. but i guess you had to say it was James? rite? Excellent chapter.. Just wondering is this a one-shot? Or like a long story. If it is justa one-shot I do hope you post more stories soon beause I love your writing style..
x0x0
Kaci

That was a great chapter. What an interesting idea for a story. I can't wait to see where you take this.

oooooooooo is this a one shot or a story? please let it be a story its so good!! and james- wow luv him!! but this hapened in their 1st yr right? they both seem a bit more older than that though! hmm anyways well done xXx

Um, this may sound like a stupid question, but... is there any more to come. Because after such a great beginning (I especially liked the part where she thinks the ground is guarding her), it would be awfully cruel of you to leave us hanging...

Great story. I love the way you make James noble and didn't want to take the credit. I love the moment you let them have their first kiss. It was great. I think story is going to be fantastic. Hope you update soon.

It is a good story, but a little sad... Anyway, I would like to know what happend next, so when would you post next chapter?

very good story so far. i especially loved the flashback where she knew her mum thought she was a freak, it made alot of sense. I hope that this isn't just a one shot, because I would love to see this story expanded. Keep Writing,

Dawnie

awwwww poor lily gosh yeah this is a pretty good chapter though im not sure where its going plotwise but still great!

Very good for a beginning of a story,Aww,now that i finished reading the first chapter that means I have to wait for the next. Good job

Kristy