Heya...

Just read this, and I actually like it. The broken-ish/chopped way that you wrote this gives it a rhythm. Terrific one-shot.

wow. your story is sad and beautiful at the same time.

can't wait for an update (will there be an update?)

wow. your story is sad and beautiful at the same time.

can't wait for an update (will there be an update?)

Wow...this story...it's amazing. Really, it is. Especially just those last few lines. And the excerpts that were bolded & in parentheses really added effect; they were so powerful, especially at the end.

You're a really talented writer. I hope to read more of your work!

Interesting. But questions if she is at the dursely's how come we havne't heard Uncle Vernon screaming? wouldn't it be better for her to be at Grimauld place?

Wow, let me tell you, I was really to head onto sleep and I was skimming through the titles, clicked on this once, read 2 sentences and exited out, about 45 seconds later I pulled it up again and I'm so glad I did. I loved the intensity of it at, it was so nicely written, it really, really was.

“Like Harry,” he whispers. “Just...Harry.”

Exactamundo! Love isn't when a person makes you feel different. It's when you feel okay being yourself around them.

I really like this a lot. It's so sweet. SADNESS!

Wow, that made my heart beat a little faster. Very sweet ending for such a sad story. Good job!

Oh my... I've been repeating OMG, OMG, OMG, over and over again in the past few minutes since I read this. It's so sad... and then, so simply beautiful.
The last bolded line connects with the last scene so well. I could almost see it coming earlier on, but actually reading it...

This is a very good story. The emotions are raw and the action crisp. Please continue...