This story was truly amazing. I absolutely loved it! I really really wish that there were more H/Hr stories out there like this one! The love scenes were magnificent and tasteful, and the quality and writing style were incredible! I found almost no grammatical errors or spelling errors, which is so awesome! (It peeves me to see misspelled words lol). You made the whole "Elf" thing believable and Hermione fighting Lysander was AWESOME. I loved the scene where her eyes turned silver and she just jacked him up and put him in the book >  I hope he shrivels in that book and turns into a House Elf! I just wanted to punch Hermione with her stubbornness concerning not telling Ron or Harry (but I know that spell was preventing her from doing so). But wow, this story was just so great. Thank you for writing this quality piece of literature!!!!!! |
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lemon5225Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 08/07/09
Haha, I just love your Ron so far. He really makes me laugh. And the scene in WizCOF with Garner and Planter had me rolling on the floor. (or at least trying to keep my snickering down to a minimum since I'm reading this at work) I'm really loving the story so far and can't wait for Harry and Hermione to come to their senses and just admit their feelings already |
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lemon5225Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/07/09
I think looking through your list of stories I've always just assumed that I've read this one, but now reading the first chapter, I'm not so sure that I have. As disgraceful as that is, it's also super exciting, because now that means I have new reading material that is guaranteed to be good! Or maybe I have read it and I'm just super forgetful. But still that's like reading it for the first time. Very exciting -- I can't wait!! |
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kidd_018Unsigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 23/06/09
Wow! what an amazing story! very well written indeed! you are one of my fave author here in PK thought you should know  you have this gift of making a very good plot accompanied by a very good choice of words and an amazing flow of the story... now i'm so proud to be your kababayan! keep up the good work!  (in my crazy mind i wish you're the one who own HP  ) |
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Ess412Signed | Chapter : 20 | Date : 05/06/09
I just read this story and it's great! no better its AMAZING. You go into great details and you clearly went into details with the elvish language.
Keep writing you're really talented and you're stories are intriguing. Simply put I loved it. |
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lemondropUnsigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 27/05/09
reading this so far, not so hot on hermiones character.. but havng said that, absolutely love how you've written ron in this! |
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EUnsigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 28/04/09
Such a bloody fantastic story! I can't wait for more pieces from you. I love the warm and glowy feeling I felt at the end of the story. I'd be very interested on reading a story following the growth of the kids, sprinkled lavishly with H/Hr moments of course.  Lovely. |
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this story is simply brilliant, i am so disappointed in myself for never having found ti earlier, i must admit! thank you for the wonderful read... |
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gemSigned | Chapter : 20 | Date : 08/03/09
Holy Moly that was a great tale. I loved the lot of it! This ending was most fulfilling and I'm left feeling calm and happy. I had tears in my eyes at the very last paragraph, and also when Ron had to excuse himself to the bathroom. Perfect ending to a really really good story. |
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gemSigned | Chapter : 19 | Date : 08/03/09
Wonderful! The balcony proposal and subsequent love making was magnificent! I loved loved loved that! |
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gemSigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 08/03/09
So wow, I wasn't expecting the final showdown in this chapter, I thought it would be the last one, now I'm anxious to see what else there is to say, probably something about house elves and spew. But anyway, the imagery in this chapter was definitely awesome and I love that Luna is an Unspeakable, so cool! |
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gemSigned | Chapter : 15 | Date : 07/03/09
I thought that binding with Crookshanks was the coolest thing ever! And is this the language of the elves from lord of the rings? It sounds like it to me, but it being a fictional language and not at all something I'm very familiar with I could be wrong.
Anyway I'm guessing that Lysander is prohibiting her from telling anyone, I remember in another chapter you said something like Hermione heard a voice that was strange yet so familiar, I'm guessing it was part of the magic that's keeping her from saying anything about it to anyone. |
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gemSigned | Chapter : 15 | Date : 07/03/09
I thought that binding with Crookshanks was the coolest thing ever! And is this the language of the elves from lord of the rings? It sounds like it to me, but it being a fictional language and not at all something I'm very familiar with I could be wrong.
Anyway I'm guessing that Lysander is prohibiting her from telling anyone, I remember in another chapter you said something like Hermione heard a voice that was strange yet so familiar, I'm guessing it was part of the magic that's keeping her from saying anything about it to anyone. |
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buff802ySigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 07/03/09
awesome job. Love the story and cannot wait to go on to the next chapter to find out what happens.
Way to go! |
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gemSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 06/03/09
That was amazing, I loved it... you write love scenes with such taste, but at the same time just the right amount of no taste, if you know what I mean. |
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