Yet another fantastic fic! And this was one of your firsts? Amazing! Never stop writing, you\'re fabulous! I love how you worked in the elvish element and I adored the commentary between the WizCOF guys. Too funny! The perfect amount of snark.

And here I am re-reading this once again

Just last night I suddenly remembered the kiss scene, and I just had to reread the whole thing. This will be forever one of my fave stories EVER.

But this read over I was struck with something I hadn't really given a second thought before.

On Harry's birthday, in that fantastic first time scene, you wrote:

"He considered begging for her to go easy on him, but it would be rather funny, wouldn’t it? If he asked that of her and she was the virgin in this picture."

And then, in the morning after chapter:

"He didn’t know if it was because she was applying what she learned from How to Give Spectacular Head with astounding skill, or if it was because she was the one giving it, but every shower room brag he ever heard in the boys’ dorms were pure bullcrap compared to the fantastic feelings she was eliciting from him right now. "

So, was Harry a virgin too or not? I first thought he wasnt, because of the virgin thought about Hermione, and because he doesn't mention anything about himself being one. But then, he talks about others' brags, and nothing about his own possible previous experiences.

And now I'm deadly curious, lol. I mean, if he wasn't a virgin, don't tell me you had him losing it with some slag, as he says about Ron's girls? Plus, while being in love with Hermione? Really, I need to know, although I'd rather have him having his first time with Hermione too, seeing you didn't even give him a girlfriend of sorts, just dates and all...

And here I am re-reading this once again

Just last night I suddenly remembered the kiss scene, and I just had to reread the whole thing. This will be forever one of my fave stories EVER.

But this read over I was struck with something I hadn't really given a second thought before.

On Harry's birthday, in that fantastic first time scene, you wrote:

"He considered begging for her to go easy on him, but it would be rather funny, wouldn’t it? If he asked that of her and she was the virgin in this picture."

And then, in the morning after chapter:

"He didn’t know if it was because she was applying what she learned from How to Give Spectacular Head with astounding skill, or if it was because she was the one giving it, but every shower room brag he ever heard in the boys’ dorms were pure bullcrap compared to the fantastic feelings she was eliciting from him right now. "

So, was Harry a virgin too or not? I first thought he wasnt, because of the virgin thought about Hermione, and because he doesn't mention anything about himself being one. But then, he talks about others' brags, and nothing about his own possible previous experiences.

And now I'm deadly curious, lol. I mean, if he wasn't a virgin, don't tell me you had him losing it with some slag, as he says about Ron's girls? Plus, while being in love with Hermione? Really, I need to know, although I'd rather have him having his first time with Hermione too, seeing you didn't even give him a girlfriend of sorts, just dates and all...

Well that is cool. I wonder what type of language it is and what type of fanficion. Well I do believe that it is time for me to go to bed. It is almost six in the morning here. Lol What an interesting chapter and interesting infomration to find out about Lysander. Great job at this whole thing.

That was a great chapter. I really ennjoyed that. I do believe that I have to go to bed after this next chapter, once we find out what Lysander is...or if he is his grandpa. Weird. Well that was a great chapter!

Well that was absolutely great. What a way to go for Harry's birthday. I really enjoyed that little story! What a great way to get Harry! I really loved this whole chapter.

Yay! No Lysander getting in the way of Hermione. I am finally glad that they're together! Woot Woot. This chapter was really brilliant. Wow..I didn't want to know about Ron dressing up as a bunny..naked. Hahahah

That was an interesting chapter. I do believe that Lysander is quite devious in his pursuits for Hermione. Very lovely. I do hope that Harry tells Hermioen that he loves her before she goes and succumbs to Lysander!

Oh that was extremely sweet. What a wonderful chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great job. How lovely to see that Mcgognall was so sweet to Hermione. Lovely job at this one

This is great. I absolutely love the way that Ron manipulated the conversation. This is one of the best stories that I have read. Very well down. I absolutely love your portrayal of the Trio.

I have an inkling that whenever Laysomething or other touches her, he puts her under a spell or something. Very interesintg...

Hm...well this is quite interesting. There is always a way to get to Ron. This is lovely. You do have a wonderful portrayal of all the characters, very canon-like. Wonderful job.

Wow there are so many chapters left and I am really excited about this one. Wonderful. I thought that Hermione was going to give them the silent treatment. Great job at her forgiving them. Hm..this Lysander, seems liek he's dong nothing wrong, but I can't help but think he has ulterior motives. Maybe he knows about Hermione's job at the minister and is trying to woo her and convince her to not persecute those death Eeaters...hmmmm

Oh well this will be good. I just read the title chapter for next chapter and it says something about silence. I suppose that Hermieon isn't going to talk to the both of them. Well, Hermione has every right to get mad at them. I do have some sort of bad feeling bout Lysander, but who knows, he could just be some handsome guy who likes Hermione. Great job.

Well that was an eveen better chapter. I really loved how you put that Harry checked his crotch and made sure that all his "troops were in place." I loved that. Great job. That'd be so weird to see half of something that nobody wants to see (i.e. half a testicle) or soemthing. Great job. I can't wait to read more of Ron's and Harry's talk.

Oh yea! YOu did have Ron come back and he made a spectacular come-back. I absoultely loved all the thinking and reasoning that he went through. Great j ob. I really enjoyed that last chapter. Wonderful job. I do hpe that Harry doesn't get caught, but I have a feeling that he does. Well, now we know that Harry loves Hermione. If only they were both not too stubborn to admit that they love each other!