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BB Ruth
Signed | Chapter : 44 | Date : 01/11/09
I'm sure you've read almost every conceivable praise that can be given for this wonderful creation of yours. I don't have enough adjectives in my vocabulary to compare to what thousands of readers have already said about FK. It took me a few days to finish and the journey through the eyes of your characters was an amazing ride.

Admittedly, I tried reading this more than a year ago but couldn't get past the smuttiness of beginning . Don't get me wrong, Reading and all things smut is one of my guilty pleasures but I think it was their age and the circumstances of their first encounter that turned me off somewhat. That was probably just my catholic upbringing or maybe because I prefer to read fics that make Canon sense. But when Rene asked me to join your interview team I was more motivated to read your work so I could be more useful. I got past the 17 year olds doing what their hormones were influencing them to do and came to realize that I apparently don't mind smut as much if the other 17 y.o. Is a vampire.

You paint very good imagery, the gore bone-chilling, the love scenes tasteful and thought provoking. your knowledge of your characters is deep and comes through their actions and dialogue, and I'm not only talking about the HP characters but most of all your original ones. The details in their motivations for their actions make the difference and I commend you for taking the time to do all that. This vampire world you've created is way much better than in the twilight series (really!) And how you weaved it into the HP world was nothing short of genius. Your intricate plot was clean and immaculate, no loose ends, everything falling perfectly in place, or so you've made it appear.

I shuddered with your description of Hermione's murder as well as her parents and was horrified when you killed L, I loved him for his funny antics, why do authors always kill off the beloved ones? And most of all I loved the snarky, witful and humorous dialogue of your characters, accepting Hermione's taste for good expensive fashion with only the littlest doubt that her practical side could be overwhelmed but her vampiric vain side. I was totally sold on this Hermione character of yours who was intrinsically her old self but in some ways very different too. Harry and his maturity in this fic was brilliantly handled. I love how you've made him such a more sexual beast than the image of boy next door doomed to be killed.

I haven't read a novel length fic before that gripped my interest like this - not even the legendary Lori's. Thank you for your time and your talent. It is a gift - that's one of my most favorite lines in this one.

Thanks$
 

Gohans_Onna
Unsigned | Chapter : 44 | Date : 02/10/09
O.M.G.

Girl, do you realize how much of an excellent writer you are? You have totally BLOWN ME AWAY with this story. I am so happy I found you >.> I was looking for so long for excellent H/Hr stories, and I finally found YOU.

Your plot is simply amazing. How do you tie in such minute details so well? I can\'t even begin to give this story the amount of praise it deserves! I am totally speechless...and last night, when I was lying in bed, knowing that today I would finish reading this story, I was wondering what in the world to write as a review, and I still have no idea, because this story was just so effing incredible!!!!!!

Now, as an author to another, I have to give some constructive criticism...lol. There were very few spelling mistakes, but there were some subtle issues with writing in different persons at some points. You would be writing in past tense and then start in a different tense, but thankfully it wasn\'t too confusing ^^ Another thing that caught my eye is (and I didn\'t double check this) how when Lucien was killed (sob), you said that Hermione\'s wand was snapped in two, but then later in the story, you had Harry return her wand to her...that confused me a little bit, and I\'m not sure if I misread it or not, but I remember being scandalized, so I\'m pretty sure I didn\'t! But I thought I would mention that.

I am so going to see if you have any other stories...this is the second one I\'ve read, so I am severely hoping you have more!!!!!

Thank you so much for this inspirational piece of work!
 

arlithil
Signed | Chapter : 44 | Date : 11/09/09
This was so GOOD! I think I said it before but words can't do this story justice. I loved it all the way through and I'm so glad I went back a few pages of searching just to find this. Even though I was looking for NC-17, Lo and behold I found this story! Thank you so much! It's been a pleasure!
Author Feedback: Hi arlithil! Well, I'm glad you liked all that overall, and I'm so very thankful for your reviews."Forever Knight" still remains, and I think always will be, the MOST passionate I've ever been writing a fanfic. It was written in a time when I had very little else to worry about, so it practically had my full attention. I would eat, sleep, and shower thinking of this story. And 44 chapters! When I started writing this, I thought I"d be done at 15--20 max. For the monster to have grown to 44--well, it just grew itself.

I'm very glad that I've got fellow HHr fans to share it with. So thank you so much for reading. If you'd like to read a tiny bit more of this story, you can hop on over to LiveJournal.com and friend me (adamanteve19). Let me know you have and I'll friend you right back. I don't know if you can still access my Forever Knight Vamp Verse and outtakes. If you can't, then you will be able to once I Friend you. If that's old news to you, you can at least get a jump on the other chapters of Angelica that I haven't released on Portkey. Maybe one day, I'll be able to finish that story.

Hope to see you on LJ.
 

arlithil
Signed | Chapter : 43 | Date : 11/09/09
Really good ending! The part about the ring, that was good! "Gimme!", that scene would be really cute to see. Wonder how long Harry gets to live, though when he does I hope Hermione decides to go with him.
 

arlithil
Signed | Chapter : 42 | Date : 11/09/09
Dhampir...I only remember that from Vampire Hunter D. And I'm too lazy to google it. Hermione needs to get in on that as well, she looks marvelous in sunlight too.
 

arlithil
Signed | Chapter : 41 | Date : 10/09/09
He's the hybrid progenitor of the vampman race! Yeah that wasn't thought out much...I'm just like Hermione though, just glad he's still Harry...(wish Hermione wasn't vamp but hey one of them had to be the vamp).
 

arlithil
Signed | Chapter : 40 | Date : 10/09/09
I don't recall any promises...but I assumed that they would either live as vampires or die of old age. This should hold true, one or the other...Whatever just happened sounded amazing though.
 

arlithil
Signed | Chapter : 39 | Date : 10/09/09
Janus got fucking owned!!! Serves him right! Not sure how about Voldemort, I mean I assume he's gone but Harry, not so sure...
 

arlithil
Signed | Chapter : 38 | Date : 10/09/09
Man she's so smart, having the potion in her mouth. Janus better not take care of her...
 

arlithil
Signed | Chapter : 36 | Date : 09/09/09
Ye ‘ave to be twa babbles aff the center ef ye didna ken that woon. NICE ONE!

Man Lucien's dead...oh and I completely understand how that needed to be. If I was in your shoes I'm not sure I could've killed him off, but for certain I couldn't have created anything this good, I mean Hermione would not have died, end of story (Harry either cause she needs him). I feels for her, and Solomon, it's like if Ron got killed in a similar manner...and I did not expect Hermione to get captured. Should've just let Harry apparate her...
 

arlithil
Signed | Chapter : 35 | Date : 09/09/09
Oh yeah. Maybe Hermione can turn back time like I mentioned in one of my reviews...but she's included in a prophecy, pretty sweet. Now if it said that her and Harry would be able to make love for all eternity after the war was over...well you didn't include the fine print so I'll assume there is that particular clause.
 

arlithil
Signed | Chapter : 34 | Date : 08/09/09
Well...Harry's chances of survival are rather slim...but he has a good chance of getting the job done. I really hope Hermione was kidding about the no sex, I mean that's just mean. Oh and I'm amazed at how much you can come up with, you should make a book. I'd like you to publish this story but...as it's Rowling's characters...
 

arlithil
Signed | Chapter : 33 | Date : 08/09/09
Well they seem to like Harry. And Henry knew where Hermione was the past five years! Say what? That's so messed up, although if it was Yasmin that was based in London she'd so be like..."Yes, Harry I know where she is...will I tell you where? Not today dear, try again next week?" the bitch. Oh and how she's "in hiding" or something sucks something fierce. So are you this familiar with different cultures or do you just do your research? I'm just curious, props man.
 

arlithil
Signed | Chapter : 32 | Date : 08/09/09
Oh well I thank you both for that bathroom scene. And it lasted longer than five minutes (well according to the story...). I can actually believe he cares about his mum though. Snape's one slippery bastard though, just leaving clues for Harry and co. everywhere!
 

arlithil
Signed | Chapter : 31 | Date : 08/09/09
You mean the dead allow you to rise? That's very selfless of them. Hehe, anyway great fighting in this chapter. And no casualties! Win Win!
 

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