oh wow! this one has hope! lol.

i like your other fics a lot but this one actually seems to end on a happier note!
haha. cool. I like this, its good stuff. so harry and hermione will get together? and ron will still be their best mate? i sure hope it can turn out alright in the end for the trio in the real books...but i doubt it. seriously doubt it.
good fic!
melissa
acoustics1220

Good job on the story. I liked it you should continue.

that was good. Update this story soon! that had good perspective to it

For one, there is a small itsy-bitsy note I find while reading this first chapter.

Your "Or was all of it all of me?” could be better phrased as - was all of it ME?-

And second, reading through it kinda makes one feel like its an AU--alternate Univers-for the reason that its a scene after the WAR and you wrote in Harry and Ron having a convo like they are talking about quidditch. Shouldnt there be more emotions, stronger and more compelling that hounds Harry than what appears to be mere weariness in the fic? Like say, brooding anger for having just killed someone, or seething menace brewing just beneath the surface?

Just a note there, mate. I love reading through your fic I look forward to reading th e next chaps.

What an absolutely perfect little conversation between Harry and Ron. I have found that there is usually not often any great Ron/Harry moments in most fics, and to read this was a welcome change. It helped too that you write so well and capture emotions so easily. A fantastic chapter and I hope you write more... if there is anything left to add.

~Ryan

Soulful. Thoughtful. Melancholy. That's what I was feeling reading this, but I also felt hopeful that Harry can find it in himself to build that life that he wants (with his best girl, naturally). Glad that he and Ron were able to have this kind of moment.

Good stuff!

It sounds great so far... There is more, though, right? *pouts*