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h/hr4ever
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/07/06
this story is great, I like your writing style it's very flowing.
 

Lilith Grager
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/04/06
You know what? The first thing that I thought when I saw your fic's name was "She likes Lifehouse", so I click it on. That album in particular, is one of my favorite "Chapter one" is the song that I like the most and I cry with "Walking away". I love this band and it happens by accident, I'm form Chile, latinamerica, and I can assure you that probably I most be the only person in this country who knows them. Some weird day I found myself downloading all their albums. They're just too good, and their songs always touch my heart so deeply that I get to tears very easily... no, not so easily, I'm not a mourner, okay? XD. Well, I really don't know why I'm telling you this, but I've never had the chance to know someone else besides me, who likes Lifehouse much as I do, or barly known them.


Your Fic it's great! I'm sure that Danakm liked it from the first word to the last one. It's just great. And I really love when people make fanfics post HBP disaster, coz it gives me hope to believe still. Harry & Hermione are meant to be together, even if their own creator doesn't see it.

 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/02/06
Your review must consist of more than 10 words. Emoticons do not count as words. This rule is in place to allow authors to get a higher level of feedback than simply the use of emoticons
 

luv4books
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/01/06
wow! that is such a heart-felt profound fic, hermione really knows how to make Harry feel better.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/12/05
This story is really really really sad, but amazing, and it stays true to character, Harry proably would act something like this after defeating voldemort.awesome!
 

Jordan
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/11/05
AWWWH
that had to be just about one of the greatest one shots in like... the world.
Nicee Job
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/11/05
YA! I loved this story. It was absolutely beutiful. I would have logged in, but my account was banned because I complained about a moderator. Sorry =( good story though.
 

Azusena
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/10/05
That was awesome though i'm surprized you didn't have him speaking kind of like raspy after he talked because you no he hasn't talked awile, but it was really good, great job!
 

harry4NDhermione4eva
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/10/05
heyy wazzz up?! this is like the first time im writing in a long time..usually i juts put"i love it i loved it!" lol which is true and easiest way for me to explain but i thought that this story was different....i love all your stories yur one of my favorite but somehting was different, i donno if yu were trying somehting out but it was differen and i like the old and same things as before, i just wanted to let you know..hope yu write more stories soon byeeee
 

CelestialDragonX
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/10/05
Aww, this was great, I liked it very much. I was a little unclear of where Harry was in the beginning, but I found it eventually. hehehe

Thanks for sharing this story.
 

Stone Cold
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/10/05
Awww. That was a nice one. I liked what I don't think JKR has even realized. That defeating Voldemort is going to cost Harry a piece of his own soul.

All she seems to care about is frakking Ron Weasley.
 

Akumako_Ronso
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/10/05
AWww!! That was really sweet. I kinda thought that Harry would struggle a bit with talking since you made it seem like he hadn't talk in a while.

You did really good though. I enjoyed reading it.

~!~Akumako_Ronso
 

Austenlover
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/10/05
That was very sweet. I didnt think Harry would ever speak. I do like how he realized that if he didnt, he would lose Hermione, and that prompted him to say what he did. I do think that when everything is over, he will need therapy (if he is still alive).
 

Phoenixstear
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/10/05
Wonderful job. I really love how you delve into Harry's thoughts and how you don't make his killing of Voldermort something easy, because killing never is, even if you do it for the greater good.
 

Starlight623
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/10/05
This was beautiful! I loved how Harry was so quiet through most of it. It couldn't be easy for him. Then it took Hermione to shake him out of his funk. And when Harry let it all come pouring out with lines like:
“I’m saying I want it all. I want to be able to do magic again. I want to marry you and shag like bunny rabbits and have a ridiculous number of children. I want… I want a future and I don’t want him messing it up, not anymore.”
I thought it was perfect. That was funny and meaningful all at the same time.

Another wonderful job!!
 

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