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wow!! this is really..wow! haha! i think this is the 3rd or 4th time reading it,but the emotions still hit me just as hard! this is def. going to my favourites! =D |
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CaliburstSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/11/07
HOLY SHIT! (I think I just lost my virginity!)
A very intense . . . This taking human emotion, desire, and need to the EXTREME, but not in terms of adding a lot of kink or making it "dirty" or pornographic. It's actually just a little to extreme, I think, a little to rough . . . But I'm not sure.
The "kittie" reference was just strange when you were already using words like "clit" - however, seeing as how it wasn't used that much and the euphemism didn't fall that far from the tree, it didn't serve to distract that badly.
I thought there could have been some action centering on Hermione's scar. It was a real visual element that opened up the possibilities for lots of metaphoric play that I wished were . . . um, played with . . . ?
I'm off to read another of your fics! |
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/12/06
Wow, this one gets added to my absolute favorites! I mean yum, yum, yummy! That was some superb writing! They have the potential to be so incredibly hot! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/11/06
This was some sexy ass shit!!! Hella intense, hella confusing, hella original. I loved it soooooooo much!!! The sexiest part was when Harry Shouted “Exuviae!” and Hermiones pants disappeared..That was HOTT!!! Ur an awesome writer!!!!!!!! |
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amazing!!! i'm so glad i decided to read this one and delay going to bed! it was defintely worth it!!! |
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bipsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/03/06
WOW!! It's so good that I read it over twice. Very intense. Wow |
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FiaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/12/05
I think they are both cracy ! Haha, they are to rough with each other. |
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Ok, it took me a little while to get to this one, but WHOA! Talk about WORTH THE WAIT!
Holy Cow Woman! Either you've had some out-of-this-world-sex in your life or you've quite a few ideas on what would make for out-of-this-world-sex! =P
Angst, sex, and Harry Potter - it just doesn't get any better! And throw an absolutely awesome author into the mix! Well, talk about icing (double entendre totally meant! hehehe)on the cake!!
I'll be on to Hooligan next. Catch ya in the reviews there!! =D |
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Ohhh WOW! This was a smokin' fanfic!! It's sooo good that I read it over twice! hehe When Harry and Hermione argue... it's all fire! I was a little shocked with the forcefulness that Harry took Hermione with, but we all know that he wouldn't REALLY hurt her or anything like that. OHH, and I just laughed soo hard when I read "He knew that she would not be able to walk tomorrow without wishing she had an ice pack nestled between her legs. Hell – he was beyond the point of friction burn!" mainly because that's what I'm kinda wishing right now too 
This is sooo going on my Favorites list! Thank you thank you!! Can't wait for more like this! |
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AlorkinSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/11/05
Wow! Love, that sounded awgfully painful! The sex was so harsh and nearly brutal, I'm surprised eithe of them had to spend the night in the hospital wing! (Try explaining that to Mme. Pomfrey!) I loved the drive down the dark twisting scottish roads int the pouring rain. well written! I'm rather surprised Hermione didn't greet Harry with a shot to the head, though, given how angry she was at him. I'm putting this into my favorite links list. Alorkin |
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ProflupineUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/10/05
Whoa! Well written unresolved sexual tension is always wonderful, but this is really exceptional for 2 reasons: 1) characterization is perfect! I can really see every thought in each of their heads and each minute action is measured and consistent with the soul of the H/Hr interaction. 2) I loved your use of descriptive imagry. Lots of detail using specific words that had just the right nuanace to amplify the images and feelings. Write more please! |
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lonliUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/10/05
That was bloody fantastic..... Written superbly conversation, plot, intensity was magnificent my pulse quickened just reading it great story! |
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Wow, that was good. Very intense, very hot. Even better than your last story. Wow. |
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You need to bottle this stuff up, and sell it to "Sex and the City" (if it was still running), because this was pure, animalistic smut, that my jaw may have dropped a few times upon reading. You weren't kidding when you said it was "hard" sex... raw, it definitely was. The only thing about scenes like these, is that the fluff (if you will) tends to get lost. And I have to admit, I do like the fluff alot!
Okay, I'll check out what comes next when you update.
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/09/05
Hey one comment. In England the cars are Right hand drives therefore she would be changing gears with her left hand and not right. |
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