What an excellent beginning to a beautifully crafted story.
Never, even after reading literally thousands of fan fics, have I seen what you did with Kreacher and the love potion. That was brilliant!
You have a wonderful, smooth style and a masterful touch with both characterization and dialogue, and your pacing is perfect.
I will be keenly following this story.

I know it's been a while since you've updated this story, but I think it really has great potential and I hope that you come back to it soon.

Very nice, love how you start to introduce the romantic relationship between Harry and Hermione even if it is the last paragraph. Keep up the great writing, and please hurry with another chapter!

Lovely. You are a great writer. It is all very realistic, and I wouldn't be surprised if it actually happened.

Loved it. Very good. Just like J.K.Rowling. GLad Harry finally got some revenge.

I love this story i hope you add a chapter soon!

this is a very good story i liked it very much i am waiting for the next chapter

this is a very good story i liked it very much i am waiting for the next chapter

THis is really well thought, i think you are really good at thinking about stories, so keep it up!

OOh and the plot thickens.... lol okay well I can't wait to see what else you have in store. As always. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

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Yet another great chapter. i am excited tor ead the next chapter so off i go!

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Aww. Loved the chapter as always and I can't wait to see what else you haev in store for this story!

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I loved the chapter. I loved how you have it set up and I love the characterization and such. Very Rowling-esque lol. Okay well I can't wait to read more so off I go.

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Oh my. Very, very interesting twist on the Harry/ Ginny relationship and the oft used love potion idea. Very well done. Harry is a tad daft, though, and so is Hermione - and I would expect her to figure it out. Maybe she's in denial? Anyway, well done - I can't wait to read more.

I`m being a good fan girl and reviewing now Sorry it took me so long. That was a fantastic chapter!! If only that chapter was in the real book, it would explain a lot and make me very happy too! I love your whole love potion/drugging theory and having Kreacher do it just fitted in perfectly. You write Kreacher really well and in character too. I can`t wait to read more!!