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This is very interestingly written... did slightly confuse me at some aspects of it thought... highlighting the niavety that i am known for amoungst my friends... lol! But i loved it! definatly a smutty classic! |
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That was hot and so very naughty... I went through fifteen pages of stories like this to find this one because I remembered reading it ages ago. GAHHH lovely!  |
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ME LOVE MUY BIONO IM REVIEWING AGIAN CUZ THE THING TOLD ME TOO lol WELL THAT WAS REALLY HOTT I think that after im done reading ur stuff u should take a cold shower  LOLOLOLOLOL |
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LOL U WERE RIGHT I TOTALLY LOVED IT LOL but let me just say it wasnt till after i finished reading i realized my heart had like stopped and i want breathing LOL THAT WAS HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
lol your a damn good writer well off to read some m,ore of ur stuff |
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Amazing.
Simpily amazing.
Made more so by the music pumping through my headphones. |
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Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
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ozUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/01/06
i really like the ending, that they leave together...i really like your stories! |
Author Feedback: Good Morning!
I always send out thank-you notes, but usually do them from my own e-mail address. But - as I do not have a way to contact you other than here - here will have to suffice!
I am so, so grateful top you fro not only reading these stories but offerng your thoughts as well. It means so much to me...
This story was the FIRST sex scene I had ever written and I was VERY nervous about it. I am glad that it turned out in a way that is pleasing!
If you are interested there is another story you might enjoy called: The Price of Angst and/or Undeniable.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Island Girl |
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WOW!! That was extremely hot and steamy! And OMG! In a club?! Talk about taking Harry and Hermione to the naughty level!!  Reading this makes me wanna dance... what 80's songs do you reccommend?? Let me know! Also, reading this under certain circumstances will get ya hot and bothered! But I nearly fell out of my seat laughing at the end with the "red panties that had a gold lion-thingy sewn into the crotch"!! That is awesome!!! Aww, now I want a pair!! hehehe Keep up the great work and I hope too see more fanfics like this!! Thanks!!! |
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OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!
Forget fanning myself this time. I'm gonna need one of those industrial jobs with the three foot blades!!!!!!!! =P
I love that it's all to those great old 80's songs. I'm an 80's girl tried and true and you just can't beat that stuff!
You're just amazing. I'm on to the others now! Keep up the great work. |
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MysticSamSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/11/05
Wow. Your description is breathtaking, and darkly sexy. You did an unbelievable job of capturing a club scene. This is going in my favorites... |
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hernndzzzSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/11/05
Wow...that was steamy!!! What a great scene. Can't wait to read more of your stories. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/10/05
WOW! I was really in the mood for this one. I was able to get into the swing. |
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TreysonUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/10/05
That, quite frankly, was one of the most powerfully erotic pieces of fan fiction I have ever come across, and it most certainly holds the top rank for a one-shot of its length. 80s power music has an effect all of its own--and I did, in fact, choose to listen to said type of music while reading this little number--but this fic was hotter than ANY song out there.
Major compliments for this. Hope to read future works by yourself, even if they possess HALF the power of this one. |
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wow, that was your first time writing this kind of thing??? it was pretty good, far out of character, but wow! |
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kbluesmomSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/09/05
(turns the a/c down a degree or 5..) WOW! that was something else! (fanning face with hand) Just enough but not too much. Impressive. Great one shot. |
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