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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 04/04/06
I think Harry should get injured 'cuz he's realy overconfident - the predalien is after him anyway. Lose an arm or something a leg if you want. But it realy shoud be Harry.
If you don't feel like it well Hermione could suffer an ambush and be saved by predator techs and become dominatrix(she's already got the suit ). Your choise bro...hope you update soon
 

Shadowstar
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 04/04/06
Homer becase nomater what harry has the asvantig it's a magic thang
 

Shadowstar
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/04/06
how about to throw a little mayhem at harry he sends a queen and four high gards at diagon ally to make a foot hold on earth and a new hive.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 10/03/06
what about harry gets real hurt. and gets taken to the alien queen who desides on giving harry the alien keen sences so now he is part alien and part predator
 

Darke Gray
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 20/02/06
By the way, I really like this and the other story. At first I didn't think the whole crossover Harry/Predator idea would work but you seem to make it work.
 

Darke Gray
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 20/02/06
I would say give it to Harry, make Hermione worry a little over Harry, Homer's female isn't really known, so you can play it off as Hermione's point of view. But I would still give the kill to Harry, he deserves something good out of it. Give him a little respect in his friends eyes, even though he was terribly injured. Thats my idea at least. But otherwise, keep up the story I really like it.
 

tubs
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 10/02/06
It doesnt matter to me who the hell gets hurt just as long as someone does. I hope that you got over you writers block and can continue with this story. Great story. Hope that you update soon.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 09/02/06
wow! This is the best fic I've read in along time!!!! Good job! Can't wait for the next...
 

alayneni
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 08/02/06
Great update. I am glad to see you didn't give up. I hope we get another chapter in this story as well as Assassin. I would prefer if Homer got the bionic implant. Harry has had way too much tragedy already! Why doesn't someone suggest using Muggle X-rays to see when there is an egg implanted in a person!
 

MRS.Draco&Harry
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 08/02/06
About you question, I think that it should be Harry and not Homer. Harry is human while Homer is an alien there for he is already special for its self. Make Harry get hurt Hermione go crazy and then Harry gains something for his hard work on helping his people.
 

magicgirl311
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 08/02/06
I think Harry to make it more dramatic. You are doing a great job so far.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/02/06
I do like it quite much. Now if you want my opionion, here's what I think you should do. Now, as you may know, when the young alien bursts from within the "host" it cracks the rib cage so it can escape. Well lets say...Harry gets infected but after the Alien bursts from his body they infuse his body with "bionic" tech nology and he lives... Now I think you can go from there. I am done here.
 

destroyerdrt
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/02/06
That was great and I thought that you had stoped this story.Glad yo did not.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
 

chatgek
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/02/06
Finally, an update!

Could you pleeeease let harry get an bionic (left) arm of something?
 

Da_Killah
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/02/06
very good chapter. it had been bugging me since "Predator" how much the Yautja warriors seemed like Space Marines, and now I'm sure that they are. Good use of a Carnifex by the way. You play 40,000? And if so which do you prefer 'nids or marines? i also think Harry should get the bionics. especially if they're gonna be the same type as the marine bionics.
 

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