Great chapter. If you want a beta, I would like to attempt it for you. A few thoughts though. When Harry explains to Hermione what happens Hermione should beat him over the head with his trunk! The idiot could have just summoned the map! He would have avoided Riddle's trap altogther. But then what would have been the point of the chapter right? Hermione should lecture him on forgetting his wizarding self. Hermione should be the one person he fears, his pissed off girlfriend!

I had other thoughts but they seemed to have left me after that rant. Oh how is Assassin comming along? Will there be a new chapter soon or do you need some ideas?

I had thought that you had stoped this story at least that was what I got from an author note you had on FF.net.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

I think Harry should get injured 'cuz he's realy overconfident - the predalien is after him anyway. Lose an arm or something a leg if you want. But it realy shoud be Harry.
If you don't feel like it well Hermione could suffer an ambush and be saved by predator techs and become dominatrix(she's already got the suit ). Your choise bro...hope you update soon

Homer becase nomater what harry has the asvantig it's a magic thang

how about to throw a little mayhem at harry he sends a queen and four high gards at diagon ally to make a foot hold on earth and a new hive.

what about harry gets real hurt. and gets taken to the alien queen who desides on giving harry the alien keen sences so now he is part alien and part predator

By the way, I really like this and the other story. At first I didn't think the whole crossover Harry/Predator idea would work but you seem to make it work.

I would say give it to Harry, make Hermione worry a little over Harry, Homer's female isn't really known, so you can play it off as Hermione's point of view. But I would still give the kill to Harry, he deserves something good out of it. Give him a little respect in his friends eyes, even though he was terribly injured. Thats my idea at least. But otherwise, keep up the story I really like it.

It doesnt matter to me who the hell gets hurt just as long as someone does. I hope that you got over you writers block and can continue with this story. Great story. Hope that you update soon.

wow! This is the best fic I've read in along time!!!! Good job! Can't wait for the next...

Great update. I am glad to see you didn't give up. I hope we get another chapter in this story as well as Assassin. I would prefer if Homer got the bionic implant. Harry has had way too much tragedy already! Why doesn't someone suggest using Muggle X-rays to see when there is an egg implanted in a person!

About you question, I think that it should be Harry and not Homer. Harry is human while Homer is an alien there for he is already special for its self. Make Harry get hurt Hermione go crazy and then Harry gains something for his hard work on helping his people.

I think Harry to make it more dramatic. You are doing a great job so far.

I do like it quite much. Now if you want my opionion, here's what I think you should do. Now, as you may know, when the young alien bursts from within the "host" it cracks the rib cage so it can escape. Well lets say...Harry gets infected but after the Alien bursts from his body they infuse his body with "bionic" tech nology and he lives... Now I think you can go from there. I am done here.

That was great and I thought that you had stoped this story.Glad yo did not.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.