A suggestion: With Harry so enhanced, making love to Hermione could be dangerous (for her)unless she is also enhanced. Once the enhancements to Harry have been verufied and all appears to be well, Hermione should corner Umos and insist she be similqarly enhanced. This will provide a second powerful fighter to oppose the Emperor and his minions. Maybe their wands could be somehow incorporated into their arms so they can easily cast a spell by simply pointing.

So far, very interesting and except for minor spelling errors and a few gramatical ones, I can't fault the writing.

I wonder what is in store for our friends. I have a good idea for Harry. Please start writing this again.

intresting, i am quite curious to see how it ends up for old moldyshorts.

Please update soon this is such a awsome story please update soon.

you must start up this story again as soon as posssible. if you do not a thousand sceaming monkeys shall devour you

I love both Predator black Rage and Assassin please write up a new chapter foir both of them these are some of my most favourite storiues in Portkey and I can't waiut for new chapter to come up I also looking forward to a big battle beteew the good guys and the bad guy so please hury and if you can will you please try making your chapters long as can.

wow that was awesome ... please please please please please please please please please udpate soon i would love to read more .. later for now


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Very very nice work!! Keep it up and I promise I'll review Assassin as well...

P.S. sorry to be anonymous all the time but know that im a big-time reader of the site and I know what I'm talking about when I say ... GET THE NEXT CAPTER UP MAN THE SUSPENSE I KILLING ME!!

Cool story! I love the hole: Harry, the preditor, thing. It is so cool. I hope you have Harry be o.k cose i want to know how the new technology in his body will help him with volermort. Well, grate job. Please up date this soon. Thank you for your time.

I think that it was eather dumb luck, or divine intervention, that told me to check Portkey.org for some reason. Now I am beyond that I did. Have always love 'Predator' from the first movie and am still loving it through this story.

i love the 40k crossover - ive thought of crossing 40k and harry before but this is superb

WOW!!!!That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

This Series is incredible. I some how missed this update several months ago but i hope that you continue this story! I love the referances to 40k as i am a SW/IG player myself!

really great!!! I just found your stpries today and I am hooked, love alliens and such, Homer and Raj are wonderful characters, I would love to see more of Fleur and Raj , of course Harry and Herms.
update soon please!!!!!!!

Man good to have u back! The chapter is the real deal, bravo! Hurry up and post the next one plz!!! Oh and the "We're talking about allowing Harry to face a Predalien completely unarmed, and win." thing is absolutely a peace of art...