lorelSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/07
I think I need the dentist to check for cavities this was so sweet. Thought it was really good though. I like happy endings. |
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oh i'm all tearful now - that was so perfect. that harry is home to her now and that her parents understand |
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Maybe it was a bit fluffy, but i lovges it anyways. It's something in the way you writes, you have it! I'm so sorry hearing you'd got a rude review. Some people are just too rude. Well, atleast i like it. I'll keep on reading. And...
P.S What i also like is that you don't just write about the kisses and stuff (that i efcourse appricieat!) You write about the hhr relation, how they are towards eacother and how they can go further from there. That's Harry and Hermione baby, Harmony all the way!
HHr forever! |
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after reading most of your stories, this is definitely one of my favorites! finally--some harry and hermione moments, and not golden!trio ones!
great job, padfoot puppyeyes.
keep it up! |
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How sweet, this story is so cute! The only thing I had difficulty understanding was if Harry and Hermione had already begun dating before the holidays. I suppose that the answer really doesn't affect the outcome at all. I reaaly liked the part where Harry heard Dumbledore's laughter. It seems like something that would really happen. I look forward to you other stories. Keep up the great writing! |
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This is so pretty. You should definitely do more one-shots with the other couples. I totally can't wait. I don't know how else to describe this fic. |
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wow, first time reader, looks like you do really good work, Keep it up. I'll read and review when I can, But I'm taking 26 units in college right now so I'm very short on free time.
Again Keep up the GREAT WORK!! |
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Wow. This was a very good story. Definately a contest worthy fic. |
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I Love IT!!!!!!!
But, please, write MORE!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!
You can make it even greater! I LOVE IT! |
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SpeedzSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/09/05
Lol. The best bit i think was Dan and Emma Granger. Thats hilarious!  Good one. Overall nice story, a bit slow going though, if you know what i mean. Anyway, nice H/Hr fic. |
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A perfect Christmas story! I loved the "ok now you're just showing off" bit at the end.  Well done, lots of us enjoy your stories, don't let a few bad apples try to spoil it for you. Keep up the good work!
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stu14688Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/09/05
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I love it. Glad the Grangers were given a Portkey. I think I might have liked it even more if Hermione said she needed to go to Harry, rather than having her mother tell her to go. I really liked Harry telling Dumbledore he was showing off. I can see him doing that. |
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DanielleUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/09/05
Well you won't hear any criticism from me! It was perfect and warm and even a bit homey? haha It was a perfect comfort fic and I loved the last few lines where she describes how he smelled..It all tied together nicely. Awesome job =) |
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*Wow*, that was good. It was so touching. I mean... wow. The homesick theme... that was ingenious yet not so. I loved it. It really moved me. It has meloncholy, but also it's very completing... uplifting. Like you just let out a deep sigh afterwards. The sense of desolation and lonliness of Harry is heartbreaking as well.
I'm so glad you wrote this. It was almost cathartic. I mean, *wow*.
Awesome job.  Please, do write more.
~panda |
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