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That was just hilarious - you are awesome to write something like this! It is the perfect remedy for the ideal world I am trying to build up in my head surrounding Harry and Hermione. It is the key to me forgetting about HBP and getting on with the rest of my fanfiction. And, you had me laughing histerically when I needed it. Thanks so much and keep writing! |
Author Feedback: I'm so glad you liked it. I personally think that even though I'm diappointed in HBP, it just challenges me to be more creative to get around all the "obstacles" JKR put in our way. Happy writing! |
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So sweet....I never saw it coming even with the Dallas reference at the beginning! BTW, I will be your beta if you ever need one when DH is not available.
Great job! |
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P.S. I'm only 14 but I've seen a TON of Dallas reruns, I love that episode!
lots o' love  ,
Tommi |
Author Feedback: Wow, only 14 and you know about Dallas. That's the great thing about cable & all those extra channels, huh? Glad you liked the Dallas twist! |
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Hey, i love this idea do you think you could possibly continue this into a full story? It would make a great plot line. The story was going sooooooo well and then it just ended! I would love for you to go on. That would just make my day. This is such a good beginning that it deserves an excellent middle and end to go with it! I hope I convinced you to continue!     
and this is me if you don't continue 
lots o' love ,
Tommi |
Author Feedback: well gosh, it's hard to say no to that. I'm not really a chapter/plot writer, but I'll promise I'll give it serious consideration and if I can think up enough detais I'll do it. Thanks for the sweet review! |
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JolienUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/09/05
I think this is a fine short h/hr so it it. Well done with you`re fifth fic.  |
Author Feedback: Thanks...you're sweet! |
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I was nine when that infamous epidode aired(and you can tell how old I am)and remember how the whole Bobby's dead(no wait it was all a dream) storyline turned out. It wouldn't have surprised me if HBP turned out the same,although we still don't know how chapter 31 was going to conclude,since Bloomsbury Publshing made JKR delete that chapter. |
Author Feedback: I was a bit worried this fic might not go over with the younger crowd, but I think I'm in good company with the 25 and over set here. I didn't realize there was a chapter 31 planned...will have to look into that. Thanks for the review! |
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LOL! Very cute! I barely remember that happening on Dallas, but when Hermione opened the shower curtain, all I could think about was Bobby.  Anyway, not a lot of the lovey stuff in this one, but it fixes HBP and that's all I need. I loved Harry's inner conflict about which towel Hermione should use.
Great stuff! |
Author Feedback: Yes, the whole Bobby/shower thing was a must. And Dudley's towel...yuck. I usually write more fluff, but my intent was simply to reveal that book 6 was a dream. The "real" book 6 would have all the fluff! Ah, I wish. Thanks for the sweet review. |
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DylanUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/09/05
Oh my, wouldn't it be great if that happened?
My eyes are still burning from the whole HBP fiasco
Would have been nice to have a bit more romance, but not to worry. Still a wonderful fic.  |
Author Feedback: I know I usually do more fluff, but I was focused on the idea of book 6 being a dream. The real fluff would end up in the "real" book 6. But I'm glad you still liked it. Thanks for the nice review. |
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