omfg, i love sky high, the fire guy (also in the covenant) HOT AS!!! he also has a hot ass lol, im naughty *winks* great story i wouldve loved for the wedding to be put in though

xoxo

“The fat man was quite irritating,” gosh that made me giggle, she just straight out and said, I love the character you've created in Victoria, she's just so much fun! And James is turning out to be a real sweetie. Great work!

They've had sex but not a first date? They never were the conventional type were they? lol Another brilliant chapter, the dinamic you have going between Lily and Vic is wonderful to read.

“I'm supposed to say no.”

That is the perfect thing for James to say, you really know your characters well, and all you've written so far seems inkeeping with that.

Another brilliantly funny chapter, this story really is wonderfully written. Kudos.

"you little dream-whore!" I laughed so hard at that! I've read this story before but it just makes me giggle so bad I couldn't help coming back for more.

It was great!! But... WHY ON GOD'S GREEN EARTH DID YOU STOP!?!?! Seriously though, it rocked!!! Keep it up!!

So far, this is one of the best L/J fanfics I've EVER read!(and i've read alot of them!)
Keep writing PLEASE! YOU ROCK AT THIS!!!

Great job! I love it, and I'm sure that J.K. would be proud!

This was on of the, if not the, cutest Lily and James fic that I've ever read. Except the ending made me sad because Lily and James should be alive and Harry shouldn't have been orphaned, but that wasn't your doing, it is all JKR's fault!

NO! I wanted the smut, the smutty, smutty, smuttness! But you SKIPPED IT! Wrong on so many levels (quoting Vicky). Though I also liked the outcome, I was a bit confused. Too bad for me, onward to next chappie!!

FINALLY! Finally, she knows he knows. And, oh my God, the dream and the baby... *tear* This story is AWESOME! Onward!

Awwww... that scene with James asleep was so...cute, I think. The dream, though, HOT!

This was pretty good, I liked how the two of them finally got...comfy with each other. The Dumbledore scene was funny. I'm a bit late reading this fic (I only like to read finished fics so I don't have to wait) but so far it's excellent!

This is interesting. Could get really interesting in later chapters. Your James is very true to character, and Sirius is, of course, a dog Can't wait to see what happens next!