Wow. The ending was great. Hermione was justifiably angry & now Harry is justifiably confised ... and hard. I'm hoping that there'll be more sexual tension in the coming chapters before they 'do the deed'.

Oh god you have to update and quickly that was an incredible first chapter keep it up!!

That was...That was....I'm speechless. What a fantastic first chapter. I think you left us all feeling like Harry did there at the end...LOL. The characterizations were perfect and the storyline is irresistible. Oh, please, please, please, don't keep us waiting too long for the next installment. I think I speak for everyone when I say that we might implode if you keep us waiting too long...

I've seen this before. 'Escape from Oblivion'. I do hope you are the same author, or she's gonna be pissed. If you are, I offer my apologies, and I loved the story in it's first run. I hope you won't leave us hanging this time. Alorkin.

i applaud you. you are an amazing author and should conintue to write more stories i cant wait till the next chapter

Excellent start. Can't wait for more. This is going to be wicked to see how Harry and Hermione both deal with this in the morning.

Harry is just an idiot sometimes, but this looks like an awesome story, i look forward to reading more, great job!

Err... I may be mistaken but I think I already read this here... But maybe I'm wrong...

You've got to continue this story. You've got to! I demand you to! Right about, NOW!

Cheers to a very nice start to a story.

errr.. i think i've read this somewhere before. it was an unfinished fic where the exact same events happened and i remember hermione saying "fuck me?fuck me, harry?" as well so...

ummm do you have permission to copy it? well, if you have permission i don't mind cos the author never finished the story and i'd like to know how it ends!

great first chapter, excelent work.
will be fun to read what happends next.

Heh, very nice intro chapter. I don't typically comment on smutfics but this one has piqued my interest. Make Harry suffer a bit for being a senseless prat, hm?

Very hot. I really like how you ended this chapter. I was a little confused at what exactly happened in the alleyway with the other guy, but it was still wonderfully written. Can't wait for more.

Nice, I like this so far and I have a feeling it's only going to get better!

How can you just leave us hanging like that? J/K! This is a fantastic story! Leaves the reader begging for me...kinda like Harry! LOL!

BTW...the last line was the best in the whole chapter!