I'm glad you credited her. You could have done so in the previous chapter though, easing all of our worries

You realize the last scene was completely copied from another story, don't you? What's the good of writing a fanfic if you steal it from another author and don't write it yourself?

Um this story sounds exactly like "Escape from Oblivion" in fact the last half of this chapter is verbatum. weird are you gobsmackt or are u plagerizing?

Dude for a minute there I thought this was the only chapter. I was going to get angry. Anyway I'm off to read the rest, just thought I'd drop a little note saying:
This was an awesome start.

Whew! Forgot how much I love this first chapter. Am adding it to my favs.

great ending and great story leading into the ending too

ooh, ooh, ooh...that was good! that was really good! very descriptive, and a cliff hanger to boot!

This was exellent.I got angry at Harry for calling her a slut when he was the slut.It didn't seem like she was the one shagging every guy she saw.Harry reminded me of a guy I know who did exactly the same thing to my friend.I loved the smut very hot.
Exellent work

~Rach

That was totally fantastic. I always wanted to read a continuation to that first fic. I am so glad that you finished and gave credit, where credit was due. I can't give enough props...Hey, two heads are better than one. And so is the case here where both of you combined your talents to complete one great fic.

This was enjoyable to read...but I will say, it was a bit weird. I can't really see Harry shagging the first girl he sees...it just doesn't seem to be in his character. He is an incredibly loyal guy who tends to bottle things up until his emotions burst.

nice story...but it was as if u had rushed thru last chapter...would hve been bttr if u had expanded it a bit n made it a 3 part story...rest all g8

Hot... REALLY! As in I'm fanning myself now because of this story of yours. Good job!

here's hoping that she put some kind of sense into harry (at first i thought she punched him whenever she woke up, but it seems that *that* didn't happen, lol). i almost can't believe hermione would get drunk like that, but it *is* understandable. and harry's being really stupid and... well, just plain SLOW. hermione did have a good point - why was he lecturing her whenever he did was half-drunk and acting like a man-whore half of the time?

ok, i'm done with my ranting now, lol. awesome job, i *really* can't wait until you continue this

GREAT! haha, bur I do feel sorry for Harry at the end... come to think about it thou, maybe not. hermione's been suffering for *years*..
update asap!!!!

In the words of Paris Hilton ... " Thats Hot ! " Hope you update ASAP!