cool if u dont confuse it with jkr's, petunia's character is good waiting for the next.

Its a pretty interesting story, so Lily and Remus are brother and sister, Petunia is nice and James is Polite, this is going to be pretty cool...

I think that story is great! It is intresting how Lily spoke. Please send next chapter soon!

It was ace i hope you do some other stories to it i think it was realy gguuuurrrrrrdddddd

ok. remember that thing i told you about how i tend to criticize? ok. here goes.
i think you've got a good plot (as far fetched as remus and lily being twins separated at birth is, i get the feeling you did that on purpose... so nvm that), but it seemed a bit rushed. perhaps that was because it was a sort of prologue and you just wanted to give background info. if you had, however, i think the dialogue should've been left out completely. because i think it's the fact that you tried to have rushed conversations that made it seem rushed.

just an idea.

it's dramatic, but again, i think that was on purpose.

but i like it, and i can't wait for the next chapter.

Natali.

erm well im not going to flame u, just to tell u that the story is very rushed. i felt as if i was running through lily's life hastily. nice plot though, but it can be developed further.

What an interesting idea! Its so nice to FINALLY read a Lily/James story that has a completely different plot line. I can't believe Lily didn't speak until she was 11! Wow! And Petunia is such a sweetheart. I like to see her all kind and loving. Good job!

im intrested... keep going!! it looks really good and im glad they are all nice !

That's a really good start to the story! I like how Lily and Remus are related. Update Soon!

Ok, i'm not shure if i reviewed to this one so if i already have you just get twice the goodness. i really think that this story has quite the possibility considering its not the whole same fall in love at the ball thingy. so yhea, good work and don't forget to update.

feeling extrememly nosey now... I wanna know what happened and how everything changed

its actually not to bad. i was a little worried when you rushed the diagon alley scene of where to get the supplies. but all in all i can't wait to see where this goes.

THIS is the story you were talking about! Its even better then I expected! I cant wait for more so keep up the good work! Oh! And I hope you had a happy birthday!

xxx~Brit~xxx

Terrible, do not add to this story go home and sit on a stoool and retire your pen

when will you update next chapterr??!! i so luv this conecpt of Lily being Remus's twin sister! ahh!!