Leah CarSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/04/06
'What a birthday. Melanie's parents had taken her out of school that year, saying school was not safe with Voldemort on the loose. Sally-Anne was dying of lung cancer and Muggles and Wizards alike were powerless to save her. Mummy and Daddy had been killed by Voldemort that day. Petunia hated her and refused to acknowledge her existence. Nobody noticed her.'so sad.
'...that squirly evil demented thingy...' Love it!
keep writing! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/01/06
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Eat chocolat and feel happy, personally I prefer ur other fics, but this was cool! Keep up the good work |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/10/05
actually i really liked it it was diferent i like your writing style |
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NatiFcs28Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/10/05
Evelyn Alexandra is a verrrrry pretty name!!!!
Aw, that was kinda cute. Ok. VERY cute. But yeah.
I loved it though. It would be good to make it into a short story with like 3 or 4 chapters.
Natali |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/09/05
Er, I've never heard of a sixteen year old girl dying of lung cancer before. Am I being annoying?  |
Author Feedback: Uh, it was the first thing I could think of. It's possible. Sixteen year olds have died of heart attacks, so surely they can die of something like cancer?
Nah *grins*. You made me think. That's a good thing.
x Cazzy x |
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Hey Cassy!
HAPPY 16th BIRTHDAY!!
Great little story! I thought is was cute - well, sad, but cute. Keep up the good work!
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Caity
PS: My birthday is three weeks from tomorrow, yay!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks! Happy birthday for three weeks! How old are you going to be?
I guess it was...
x Cazzy x |
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I really liked this, sure it was a bit unrealistic, but quite cute. Oh, and Happy Birthday! |
Author Feedback: Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it!!
x Cazzy x |
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HAPPY 16TH BIRTHDAY!
That was sweet. Poor Lily, losing her parents on her BIRTHDAY and no friends to share it with. But thank goodness James was there. Poor kid, losing his baby sister too.
Good job! Keep writing! And once again, HAPPY BIRTHDAY! |
Author Feedback: Hey Amanda!!
Thanks!! I know...poor kids!! I feel so sorry for them...
ly,
x Cazzy x |
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happy brithday cazzy! , really good caz, short but good |
Author Feedback: Thanks Dana!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
*grins* Raven??
x Cazzy x |
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oh, that's so sweet. I've read your other stories and I think they're all great. Good job! |
Author Feedback: Thanks!!
x Cazzy x |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/05
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!! hope all ur wishes come true!!  Great fic...was abit sad and it almost made me cry but good! |
Author Feedback: Thanks!! Oh, I had a great time!
I'm sorry that I made it so sad, but it's the basic theme of everything I write; there is the undenying line of truth that SOMEONE is likely to die in most of my fics!! Not always, but very often...
Thanks so much!
ly,
x Cazzy x |
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