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Wow. I loved that story, lol, and I love storms too. I don't think there's anything sexier than twirling out in the rain with the one you love, and you captured it here. Thank you a bunch!
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I know I'm a little late, but I wanted to let you know that I absolutely adored this fic. Awesome, pure awesomeness.
You know lately L/J fics are shamefully silly, I was starting to lose hope and you bought faith back to me.
I'd love to read more of your writing. |
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Leah CarSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/04/06
'Lily's always hated storms, but if James can teach her to face her fears, maybe she'll see that there's more to them than lightening and thunder' nice intro.
'Hearing a storm brewing, Lily smiled. She didn't mind a little rain on her wedding day. ' nice ending.
'The next morning, when Sirius told James about how some idiot had come back into the castle soaking wet, leaving puddles through the halls, he couldn't understand why both he and Lily Evans, who was sitting just a little ways away, started laughing.' funny
that was good. keep writing! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/10/05
a loved it it was really good to bad there isn't any more |
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It's cute. I love the rain. A proper storm is positively gorgeous. I'm glad to see I'm no the only one. |
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HHr4evrSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/09/05
That was so cute! I thought they were going to kiss though...but I loved it all the same. This was one of my first L/J fics...good first impression. |
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HarryluvrSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/05
This was really sweet! Keep up the really great work and write more fanfictions! |
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this is a good fic
i think that it would have been better if they had kissed
this is really good
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/05
awwww that a cute story! oo im the frist review! yay! |
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