AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/04/07
Yay! I recognized the Teen Idol part! The Queen Anne's Lace part, right? It is a flower, just so you know.
I thought it was really good. You could rewrite it (making it longer), and it would still be good. |
Author Feedback: Yep that's where it's from. And thanks, I did know it's a flower, I hope I didn't mkae it seem like it wasn't one.
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hermy415Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/02/07
wow... such a sweet story... simple yet it made me swoon... i like the part where everybody's reaction to hermione after they saw her is wow... WOW, such a simple word, but full of feelings, you know?... but i like the part where they're taking a walk along the lake....
I support h/hr!!!
Proud to be a delusional Harmonian!!! |
Author Feedback: Awwww, I'm glad I could make you swoon!!
Thanks for your review!!!!
p.s. I'm proud to be a delusional Harmonian too!!! |
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FrancescaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/04/06
Wow! love the story! you took the last part from Meg Cabot's teen idol didn't you? i love that book! great story! |
Author Feedback: Um, yeah I said that in the author's note.....
Thanks for your review! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/02/06
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Author Feedback: wow really? that is so cool!!
Thanks for your review!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/02/06
i like the FREIENDS TO LOVERS better just bcoz it had lily&&james |
Author Feedback: ummmmm....... alright then........
Thanks for your review....I think......... |
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LinseyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/06
why didnt i like it at first? because it did seem a lot like teen idol i was thinking "hmm where have i read this before" and then i used my head and went up to read and realized it was teen idol so i finished it and liked it |
Author Feedback: lol, well I'm gald you ended up liking it and that you can go up and realize that i put in the diclaimer that it was from Teen Idol....some of my readers didn't read that part....
Thanks for your review!!! |
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Emmablk1Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/12/05
Aww!! That was so sweet! I really liked that...please don't tell me that that's all! 
emmablk1 |
Author Feedback: Thanks....yeah that's all for this story, sorry.
Thanks for your review!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/10/05
ok so this plot was exactely out of teen idol by meg cabot. you need some more original ideas. |
Author Feedback: DUH!!! I put that in the disclaimer. I'll get more original ideas (which you'd know I have if you checked out my other stories) if you read things more carefully and get better in grammar. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/09/05
it was very cool. good job. u should do more.  |
Author Feedback: Thanks!!! |
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LinseyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/09/05
at first i didnt really like it. but then i read that it was kinda like Teen Idol and thats one of my favorite books (besides hp of course) and that completely changed my mind. I LOVED IT! |
Author Feedback: why didn't you like it? |
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SpeedzSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/09/05
Nice fan fic. One liiiill prob, ya didnt explain what Hermione was wearin to make her look beautiful. It mitghta helped a bit for the imagination 2 run if ya get what i mean. Im just givin sum advice k? U shuld write another story, u have talent.  |
Author Feedback: dude, i *did* write another fanfic.
Thanks for your review |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/05
Thas good but it was a bit rushed and cliched but that's oki cuz I love cliches yay! Lol don't mind me I'm insane |
Author Feedback: um, okay then
Thanks for the review |
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MichaelUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/05
Not the best h/hr fic but surely a very nice h/hr to read. That makes people feel better. |
Author Feedback: Um, thanks?? I'm glad it made you feel better lol.
Thanks for the review!! |
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It's not bad. Though there is an overabundance of dialogue, without enough scene setting.
Plus the cardinal sin of placing an author's note/opinion/cutsy comment in the middle of the story body: i.e. (this is where you go awww)
But for a first effort, it's a good go. |
Author Feedback: That's not a "carndinal sin". I've seen other really great authors do it before. This story needed more dialouge.
Sorry you didn't like it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/09/05
Thats of that meg cabot book !!!!
With jenna greenley in it !!! |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I said that in the story. "Teen Idol"
Thanks for the reviews! |
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