hermy415Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/02/07
wow, forever indeed.... hmmm, very cool story, although i didn't see h/hr anywhere in the story except maybe in the picture.. i wish i have friends like that.. forever indeed...
I support h/hr!!!
Proud to be a Delusional Harmonian!!! |
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Light256Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/02/06
nice one shot. a nice happy ending  keep up the good work |
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Nice. I wonder, is Harry using polyjuice, or has he really gotten that old? Anyway, it's nice to know the trio stuck together that long. If what they've gone through together can't bind them together forever, nothing can. |
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stu14688Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/09/05
It may not be what you usually write, but I do like it. I think it's good. I love the ending, by the way! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/09/05
cute cute cute cute! i love it you have a nack for writing dont you! |
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I like the idea of a balding Ron... I don't know why... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/09/05
This was great! I really like how you put the ending together, but somehow it seems like you need another chapter to end... maybe it's me. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/09/05
I like it so far. It seems a little scattered at the end. |
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Aw. That's so cute. I really liked it. You're right that some parts didn't make a lot of sense. But, I loved the end. I wish all friendships could end like that, everyone just growing old together. |
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Ok, even though it H/Hr fic, I still enjoyed reading it. I didn't find anything confusing at all and it was a very well-written story, save for a few grammer mistakes. This was an excellent one-shot, you should be very proud of yourself!
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/09/05
gray hair, how old are they? And were you hinting at a romance between HArry and Hermione in the beggining with the staring. O nm 30 years. I love how you used an outside person, a new character's point of view. Great job! |
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mugglemomUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/09/05
I like your story. While not focused on the trio, it makes for a lovely quick, sweet read. And it makes sense if you remeber its about friendship. |
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My question (rhetorical, of course), is why would anyone want to write about Lockhart, when they could write about the savior of the wizarding world? Harry has to be, at least 100 times more interesting than that fraud. That being said, and I know that you said that this was a friendship fic, but it would have been nice to know that they were more involved with each other's lives than just what Tessa saw. Of course, I also realise that if Harry and Hermione were married, let's say, that would defeat the whole plot bunny. Cute! |
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So much left open for you to explain! Why is Hermione the head of Ravenclaw? Will Tess get to speak to Harry? What about any interactions between the three over the years (such as marrage, children, etc (possiblely between each other))? As it stands, it's a friendship fic, and not any paticular pairing. Please write more on this! |
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Psy_GirlSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/09/05
Ronīs bald!! LOL!!! awww
I like this kind of fic!! It wouldīve been interesting if "Tess" found more about the trio!
More!
LOL Ronīs bald!!! |
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