MichaelUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 11/05/06
hey I thougt this is a NC-17...where is the sex honey?
let them fuck or something |
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DanielleUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 20/03/06
ROFLMAO! That last part was hilarious! And in all reality, this entire fic is brilliant. I hope you update soon. Cheers!  |
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hi,
it's max again.
just come by to drop more love of your stories. their wonderful. and too rite devilish. but in all seriousness, i'll be quite frank with you. i'm only trying to gain more points so i can get more chapter updates for your other story, the triwizard tournament, (wich, by the way is bloody brilliant!)
keep up the good work mate! |
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maxUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 13/02/06
you know. i've read your other fics so this isn;t your first novel to me, but i think i'm getting addicted to your work.
(which, by the way is a complement.)
keep up the good work.
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ozUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 28/01/06
ummm i was just wonderin, is this fic over? i dunno, i still like it! hope you do update!!! |
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everyone should have gotten naked
are you going to continue this fic?
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/01/06
This is a realli good story so far. keep it up |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 23/12/05
PLEASE stop saying "faggot," its INCREDIBLY offensive and absolutely unneccessary. Its not entertaining- only upsetting and it serves no point in the story. It makes for bad writing too. |
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ooo, the idea of the boys naked...far too wonderful for my imagination  Can't wait for more! |
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I would be furious if people were betting on when I was going to get engaged...but I'm not a guy I guess. Hilarious! I'm loving it |
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SageSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 07/12/05
That chapter was hilarious! I think you should definitely do one in your POV again! I always gives thte reader a look into the mind of the author. But hey, if you don't want to do it again, fine! I respect that, just update soon! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 05/12/05
Amazing as always.. Always very nice when you update. I admire fanfiction authors who manage to produce so many fantastic stories, and you are currently the number 1.  |
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You're POV thing was so funny. So was Sirius's. I really burst out laughing the minute I read it. My dad was watching T.V. from the sofa and he was like, "What the heck are you laughing about?" And that just made me giggle even more. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad. It was odd, I think, but I couldn't resist.
And you're so brave, reading a fic like mine in the same room as your dad, lol. |
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Sirius, a gentleman? You've got to be kidding. Sirius likes Chloe! How can Sirius get a girl to say yes every time hs puts on a puppy dog face? Doesn't it wear off? |
Author Feedback: In my eyes, Sirius is a rough-around-the-edges sort of guy who is definitely a gentleman whenever a lady's around.
And, oh, I don't know!! It's Sirius.  Shall we leave it at that?
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The part about Rob or Bobby is so disgusting. I couldn't help saying ewwwwwww. Great bets, though Peter's going to lose 2 knuts. Why don't they write Sirius's bet? |
Author Feedback: Sirius' was made with James' parents beforehand. That's why. Why say it again, you know?
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