BOOM!HEAD SHOT!! hahahahah THat was fun! And the playfull bander between H&Hr was fun also, but I want those two going at it like rabits....heheheh. Anyway, its good to see this going on. Hope to see more soon! See ya.

That was a great chapter. I hope that you will post again soon. Thanks.

I might as well say wha' took ya so long but then again ... GOOD SHOW MAN! Thougn you may not update very often I can tell you this was really worth the wait!!! Keep writhing both Assasin and Black rage, like I said a few reviews back this is really some story!

P.S. and if you want a beta reader send it to thenamlesplace@yahoo.com - I've done a lot of betas for mugglenet.

Loved it PLEASE! hurry and do the next chapter quickly and don't take as long I do so love Assassin it great

HAHAHA!!!!That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

Oh, totaly cool! Brilliant up date, really. I think you should have Harr and Hermione have a 'talk' in the next chapter to tell some of the things Harry did and mabey have Hermione curse him a bit but not for long. That would be tottaly cool but however you writte it i emagen it will rock all the same. I really hope you up date soon. Please up date soon ( sorry for repeating)! Thank you for your time!

This is really good! - i hope you continue updating both this story and predator black rage!

Well I think that a Bourne Identity crossover is utterly badass, especially yours. If you’re looking for writing material you might consider just changing up your story a little. Lose the guns and had more detail to your fight scenes, that way it seems like there’s always some kind of struggle going and it keeps people on the edge. You could also try putting more depth into the romance scheme of the story, add heartbreak, and add fluff, anything to keep it interesting. You could also write the story out so that Harry goes back to school after his training with Bourne; god knows it would be interesting to see an assassin walking around Hogwarts going to classes. You could put in things that would show just all that he learned by having him getting in fights with Slytherins , using his training to talk his way out of trouble, building and using gadgets all while he’s going to school .

If you don’t really feel like writing much of a plot, you could always throw your little alternate universe in at an earlier time in the timeline. Ex- Have Sirius send an old acquaintance to the Dursleys after Harry’s third year. You have a whole summer to write about the training

Heh, glad you are continuing the story, pretty good so far, the whole harry and cloak was pretty funny ^_^ Cant wait for next update

o_O Heh....the whole hermione being a impersonator then rescuing hermione seemed a tad bit rushed.....other then that its ok

@_@ Jason bourne....bourne identity? Nice idea though, harry being a assassin and such, Very nice idea indeed =P

more more!!! this is really good!! please write more!!!
I love it love it love it!! He is POWERFUL in muggle and magic ways!!

Hey, you have some really interesting story ideas, but I like them. I hope you keep this one up and running. By the way, if you are still looking for people to Beta your stories I would be able to. Email me about it if you want to.

DG

Great story, it would be a fatal mistake if you stopped writing this great piece of work. I hope I can read the next chapter soon.

That is great I hope that the next post will be soon. You could make the chapters a little longer with more of the plot added in. Please post the next chapter soon.