 They kissed! Oh the suspense! You should update really soon, I just can't wait for good stories too long, I go insane.  |
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Great start. update soon! I also loved your other two stories.  |
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Great chapter. I hope the next one will be just as good. Keep writing. Only one question, will Harry end up with Hermione? |
Author Feedback: Hahaha. I plead the fifth. |
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Oh that was a real good first chapter. I liked it a lot. Please post your next chapter soon. I can't wait to read it!  Great Job. |
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Off to a good snog...erm, start. 
I like this take on things...how the settle into the search for the Horcruxes and living together. I admit I was a tad disappointed by Hermione's reaction, but upon further reflection, it's spot-on for her. She's the worrier and thinker.
Hopefully, Harry _will_ get around to telling her how natural kissing her felt.
Waiting for more... |
Author Feedback: Hee. Funny opening joke (is easily amused).
I was worried about Hermione's reaction. I thought that it seemed her, but after book 6, it's harder to judge Hermione's actions.
I'm gonna get a big chunk of chapter 2 done this weekend! Thanks for reading! |
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JulsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/05
I have to say I reaaaallyyy like this story so far!!!
This is credible, has a nice touch of teenage-hormones thing going on... and it's good. I only feel bad for Ron though, 'cause he seems like he's fallen for Hermione (at least that's what it felt to me), but other than that... it's all good.
And you have here someone looking forward to the next chappie! |
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Zephyr892Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/05
intresting..... anyways, good so far, lets see where this goes though..... good writing i just wish you had written more :-p |
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Me91Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/05
I really like this story!!...Harry and hermione stuck together after that...nice! |
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/05
Nice! Very nice actually... If updates won't be coming with too much time in between I really think this has some potential!! |
Author Feedback: I'm really, really pushing myself with updates. School just started up again, but I always find myself writing a lot as a distraction when I have homework. This is the first time that I've taken on a multi-chaptered fic in a while, so I'd be disappointed in myself if I updated slowly.
Thanks for the review! |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/05
A really great start- I can't wait to see how this work this "fluke" out. Keep up the good work and update soon. |
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Heu Queen C!!!...awesome chapter!...kinda seems like hermione doesn't like harry...not in "that" way anyways...anyways, please update as soon as possible and please keep up the GREAT work! |
Author Feedback: Don't worry, Hermione's intentions are revealed next chapter. While I didn't want to dangle snogging probabilities in front of you for chapter upon chapter, I didn't want them to jump into it right away. Besides, tension is totally roxors!
Thanks for reviewing! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/05
please update as soon as possible. i cant wait for the next chapter. |
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texasgalSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/09/05
Great start. You've managed to capture my attention again. I think you've really got me warming up to the Harry/Hermione ship. Keep up the good work, and please update soon.
By the way, did you decide to do a sequel? |
Author Feedback: All sequel plans have been temporarily suspended, as this fic just kinda jumped on me while I was at the beach, and I didn't want anything to distract me from it.
And yessss! It's always nive to know we might be converting someone to H/Hr. Thanks for the review! |
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Ah, the tension!! And the lack of impulse control! Gotta love it! There are just some times when these things work so well together! This was a great first chapter, and I really enjoyed it. I'm looking forward to what's coming next. Keep it up... |
Author Feedback: Sometimes, it is so hard to remember that they're all teenagers, so remembering that lack of control is a must. (Of course, as my dad once said "Rowling can write 'teenage boy' much better than I think even teenage boys can")
Thanks for the review! I hope you stick around to see what's next! |
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