Good story. I was chompin at the bit for an update on it. I loved how you made Ron an asshole, and Harry immediately chopped him to hamburger. I thought that was what was going to happen to voldemort, but somehow his 'soul' was put into the alien. I thought that kinda sucked. I was wishing for more of a prolonged painful death for him. With a permanence to it. I understand you have another story (sequel), and I can appreciate that you seem to have wanted to take the story in a different direction, but it seems that it happened midway through the story. Good luck, and keep em coming...

is that the end???? what! thats soo not cool you have to make a secule!

Still great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

All i got to say is nice. I like your detailed work and everything. Now, I actually understand the Brax thing, but that was a little late.

Btw nice cliffie. Eagerly awaiting nice chapter.

Great story the ending total caught me of guard the next story I hope will be just as good keep up the good work. update assassin please.

aruna360

This was great as normal! Okay! I will be looking forward to the post!

Hurry and update! I love this story sooooooooooo much! I don't want to end!

That was a rather interesting chapter. So now 3 predators are there.

I never really seen on of the movies with the Predators in them. So can you explain it a little to me sometime. Well, I'll e-mail you some questions sometime.

Keep up the good work.

I LOVE THIS!! Haha, this is great, man i would have never expected, great stuff continue writting every chapter i find myself more and more interesting in how you meld this world into your own views.

I'm actually enjoying this story. It seems a bit rushed at points and I don't get why you have everything italised but hey, it's okay.

I'm curious though, in the second chapter you said Fleur and Oliver Wood were planning on getting married. Why is she suddenly going after Raj? Or did I miss something?

Ah, and not to nitpick, lol, but it might be easier to read the chapters if you put dividers between different scenes. Sometimes it can get confusing if scenes run together. I'm not be critical, just hoping to give you some tips!

Keep up the nice work.


PhoenixFirebolt

Nice bit of fluff. Good to have Harry happy once in a while. Did you mean to say that this the second to last chapter? If so how long are you going to have to make the next chapter just to tie things up?

That was great I hope that every thing works out for them.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

That was great and the way that the Predators treat women is very likely because we never see there females in the movies.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

WOW, i found your story and started to read it. I LOVER how you mixed AvP with HP. VERY VERY VERY original. Can't wait to see the Fight on Halloween tho, Should be good.

I know Hermione is CRAZY about Harry, but having her change taht much is a little to much, not bad persay but a little much.

Hermione, that got her! I can't believe she forgot that and Ginny almost had her right where she wanted her, if only Harry hadn't clued her in! The Deatheaters are going to pay dearly on Halloween! H/Hr always and forever! This story is totally awesome and so is assassin, please update soon!

S.K.