It's a great story. It was dark I loved the ceremony with the milk and salt it was unexpected but some how it made sense.

great so far
i love the darker harry... it fits him perfectly.
can't wait to see hermione!

W00t!

I love your writing!

There's some word repeats in there, but it's good.

I love the way the story is told. i don't know what it is...there's just something about your wording that conveys so much sadness. The aftermath of the battle was so devestating. You prtrayed it very well. You evoke alot of emotion without having to use many words. that's a great talent.

The 'dark" Harry...I think...you did quite well with. Many authors can't pull that chracterization off too easily. You give a great reason for it though. It's fantastic.

I can't wait to see where you're going with this "Undead" and sword thing too.

Subtleties. I love! The narrative has an almost surrealistic quality about it as well.

Great job! *Adds to favorites*

~panda

Quite good. The first chapter especially, which had a haunting quality, I thought. I very much like your portrayls, they seem in-character and well thought out, especially of the darker Harry, and of Ron in this flashback.

Oh my God that was sooo sad, I loved the part about Dumbledore! I just love his character. This has to be one of my favorite fan fictions!

i like your style of writing. the descriptions are very vivid and well writen. what are these ... undead things? what happened to ginny? i am guessing this will not be d/g then, huh. i guess it doesn't really fit with the story. does harry live with hermione? are they dating already? i hope not. i want to see how they would get together. or did harry distance himself from everyone? anyway, update soon!

Wow - that was very dark. Very intriguing as well. Hope that new chapter comes soon.

Ohh! What happens next?!?

Oooo, you've got me interested. mark of a good storyteller is to get your reader hooked in the first few chapters. Very good!

Yay! Bring on the darkness! I love this stuff. You do such a wonderful job Bri! *huggles*

geez, i liked this and wow.

Great chapter...

Great story, really amazing, especially with the idea of the milk and the salt and everything. it has great description and I know it will be a great story.

This is an interesting story! I can't wait to see where you go with this!

great ch.cant wait for more whoooo that was a quick update i was just here.