Wow. This story is intense. A lot can be happening, and I am not sure which way to think. Please, oh please update soon.

Wow...
That was... well, I don't know. Amahhzing. I loved it. This chapter was kind of dark, don't you think? I know wat you mean about not being able to update because you're busy. But now that school's over you can. And as for me, well... I'm still too lazy to come up with something for a new chapter. I don't really write HP fanfiction. I read them.
Until your next update,
Ai-Ai

Wow... that was amazing! I could imagine Molly being so dismissive of Hermione after the break up with ickle Ronnie-kins. Hmm... I wonder what's up with Ginny. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

god i love this story's mood and atmosphere so much. the decription of hermione and the rest is vague and intoxicating. please please pretty please do update asap!!

I like your style of writing. Very much. It's short, but straight to the point. I also loved the line, "Because I like Tweeety." Great explanation. Update soon!

Miss Mady

I am totally and utterly confused as to what is going on....but in a good way. You have me totally intrigued with what is happening with everyone. What in the world is going on with Harry? I wonder if part of Hermione's attitude is that she feels guilty that while her parents were being attacked and Harry's life in danger while rescuing them, she was snogging Ron (just the visual makes me cringe). I was a little confused as to the exchange between Ron and Hermione in this chapter...are they together or just friends, I was a little confused with that. I am just dying for the dam to break with Ginny and Hermione what with each of them trying to lay claim to harry in a way. Also, what is Ginny doing in Harry's room all the time. I noticed her hand was bandaged and she had a sly smile on her face. Did she mix her own blood with Harry's for some bizarre bonding thing or something? Is Harry aware of his surroundings at all? Why is he not breathing? So many questions....can't wait to find out the answer.

Albeit the pleasing eloquence of vocabulary and our shared interest in Lockean empiricism (especially after discovering "LOST"), I couldn't finish the first chapter b/c well... I guess I'm just uncomfortable thinking about the whole R/Hr thing *retches* and I would have liked a warning I suppose (and don't even get me started on certain moments that are now sadly canon due to what was HBP)

Wow, this is really good! Can't wait to read the next chapter...
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Not bad, but a little confusing when it comes to the narrative and POV of a character. I got lost while reading this story at certain sections.

I really like how edgy your writing is. I'm anxious to see where this story goes, but I also understand about school. Just update whenever you can; I think this story has a lot of promise.

Hope to see more of this story it is rather interesting... I really like how you have portrayed Hermione in this fic keep up the good work.

I'm glad you found the time to update! I'm really enjoying this fic and just your general writing style; it's almost like poetry. And the imagery is amazing, especially with colors and hands and such. Keep up the good work, I hope to read the next chapter soon!

That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

I am loving the story. Your writing style is superb! I love the little hints and you're very good at the description fo Hermione when she's disconnected. I also like the conversation between Ginny and Hermione. I can definitely see that happening, considering the relationships they're in. I can't wait for the next chapter!

LOVED this chapter. I'm glad you decided to continue with the story. I am curious to see where you are taking this with the Hermione and Ginny tension. It seems that Ginny isn't happy that Hermione was with Ron the way she was talking to Hermione. I hope you bring out what it was that crawled up her rear. I can hardly wait for the next chapter and keep up the excelent writing.