I really enjoyed this little one-shot, the ending was quite unexpected but so sweet! I wish it had been longer though, maybe you'll consider expanding the idea?
Beautiful though, simply beautiful! 
H/Hr forever!
PhoenixFirebolt |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/05
Wow. Powerful little story. I like the motif of walking and how you incorporated it into a wedding ceremony. |
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Wow... Unexpected end also... Excellent writing.
Simple, beautiful and to the point. I love that.
Continue
Rufus |
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Hi!
For a short little one-shot this one wasn't that bad. I really enjoyed reading it. It was well-written and nicely thought out.
Just one thing: If you wanted Harry and Hermione to still be 'battling evil', then how come you made them Unspeakables and not Aurors? Just wondering.
Again, nice job!
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Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. Even though no one knows what an Unspeakable does, I think of them as like secret agents, intelligence, x-files, type of thing and I guess I assume that whatever they do it has something to do with the bad guys...even if it's more along the lines of investigating rather than battling. Thanks for pointing that out to me though. Glad you liked the rest of it!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/05
Hi!
For a short little one-shot this one wasn't that bad. I really enjoyed reading it. It was well-written and nicely thought out.
Just one thing: If you wanted Harry and Hermione to still be 'battling evil', then how come you made them Unspeakables and not Aurors? Just wondering.
Again, nice job!
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Caity |
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SpeedzUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/05
Yeah i have a minute.
Awwwwww, wasnt that a sweet lil story.   Great, loved it |
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Hmm..usually it's the woman who does some reminiscing during weddings. This was quite fun! |
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DylanUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/09/05
That was really great. 
It was way too short though.I would have loved to have read more. I crave H/Hr stories, and good ones like this always end too soon. 
Good job. |
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