oi, me again...
so, you could pick up where you left this one... it's a really nice story, at least from what i could make out...
Maybe after you finish the others, i'm sure you're pretty busy... Well, i just wanted you to know that it is really nice...

this story is good and i think u should write at least another 2 chapters or so... plz? i want to know if hermione gets with harry and becomes friends with ginny.

Great just like your other story, great job i really liked it even if there were a few grammatical errors

Please do add to this it's really good and i've read this story before you know the one you used for this story or whatever, and i really liked it and i always wanted it to continue you know to see waht would happen next...

O I really liked this it was really good, any chance of a sequel or something?

Although this story evinces nice flow and rhythm to readers, one thing I wanted clarified is that is Harry dead or not? Nice Job, again!!!

Very nice story & concept. There were a few grammatical errors that jumped out, but otherwise very thoughtful and well done.

This was really good! Keep up the really great work and write a whole lot more fanfictions soon!

you need to write more to this!!!!! seriously this is a great start but its just that its only the start.but then again you can just leave it but i wish that you would continue it *wink* (hint hint)

Very interesting idea with the roses. I liked how you played out her choices.

Very original and interesting concept--. I liked it and thought you did a good job with the garden of possibilities.

If you don't mind a gentle suggestion, you might consider a beta for the spelling/grammatical errors. That way nothing would detract from your writing. You have a lovely, poetic, almost other-wordly style.

You did a good job with the narrative bits. I always admire people who are able to write narrative, since I'm much better with dialogue. And actually the switch from first to third person doesn't need to be changed--perhaps just put the first person parts in italics for easier reading.

I hope to see more of your work, Azusena!

wow, this is one of the best peices of fiction I read as far as a oneshot goes. you have done really well and I hope that you will post often if this is the work you do. it is very refreshbing to read something that isn't a romance or action flick but is just about the choices we make. Keep up the great work.

Loved it! It was unique that's the true beauty of writing not repeatedly writing the same thing over and over. Your story is far from good it's brilliant! Write another story and I'll be on the look out for it.

Rosi