AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/12/05
I likked that story alot. Poor ron he's dead  and Harry and Hermione discover their love for one another. Can you please help me discover how to make a fan fiction story. I would like to know at MissDanRadcliffe . thanks alot.  |
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For a novice, this was a very well-written story. I think I'm gonna go with the old standby, and say that people are always way too harsh with their own writing. I know I am, and I think you are too. |
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Excellent! I love the drama (but of course the fluff is good too!)  |
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No words...really! I simply loved it! It's really beautiful and a little sad...Ron's death and such Well, carry on!
Kisses'n'hugs,
Joanne |
Author Feedback: Yes, I actually hated killling Ron off, but the story called for it and the events of HBP gave me little choice in figuring out how to re-sort the pairings. Thanks for the sweet review! |
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Let's hope that this story will come true in Book 7. Though I prefer Neville to be alive and possibly be with Ginny, and Ron be with Luna. Though it may be possible that Neville be with Luna if Book 6 were to be believed. Another possibility is to kill all Weasleys just to make Mrs Weasley's Boggart scare in OOTP comes true. |
Author Feedback: I would prefer if both Neville & Ron remain alive as well, but Ginny...hmm. I used to like her so much until she becamse a more prominent character in the books. I think background is her best place  Thanks for the nice review. |
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S.P.E.W.Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/09/05
Well if you're still a novice, you're a very good novice!!
Really liked this one, sad in parts but at least Harry finally realises what Hermione means to him. I don't hold out much hope, but even if we don't get H/Hr in book seven, I at least hope he acknowledges how important Hermione is to him, and everything that she's done for him, before the final battle. That will be a very emotional moment, even if it's only on a friendship level!
I liked the 'silly girl' part as well. I remember reading a theory that what Harry heard near Dementors - the 'silly girl' bit - was referring to a future event when Voldemort goes for Hermione. The theory was based on the fact that Hermione is called 'silly girl' quite a bit during the series, and they saw that as foreshadowing. Don't buy it myself, but it's a nice parallel all the same, and you're very perceptive to pick it up!
I think you're a really good writer, and I'm looking forward to reading more!  |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much for the wonderful review. I hadn't heard of the "Voldemort after Hermione" theory, but at this point I feel clueless, so maybe. No matter what happens with Ron & Ginny, I just hope that Hermione returns to her normal place in Harry's life, because I don't think he could live without her...she is irreplaceable...as are all good friends!  |
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Lovely one Mischief! I knew you would kill Ron off!  Very intense! Keep writing....I love reading these! |
Author Feedback: Yes, I know, poor Ron. It's not that I don't like Ron, I do, but I feel that in JKR's book 7 that there is a high probability that one of the trio will die. I don't like it, but I don't see how all three of them can face everything they must and all make it out alive. 
Anyway, I really do like Ron and didn't mean to come off as if I don't. Ginny on the other hand, well, I miss the Ginny of old, but not the SuperGinny in book 6. I was kind to her in my other story, but had to throw in a little bashing here. |
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oww, how sad and yet how uplfting it is at the same time, well done |
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Awww....that was a great story. Too bad for Ron, though. H/Hr shippers unite! Keep up the good work... |
Author Feedback: Thanks.Yes, I know, poor Ron. It's not that I don't like Ron, I do, but I feel that in JKR's book 7 that there is a high probability that one of the trio will die. I don't like it, but I don't see how all three of them can face everything they must and all make it out alive.
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wyadraSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/09/05
I like your story telling, but the bit about Harry's relationship with Ginny being naive just doesn't ring true.
I found that relationship in book 6 very odd (as i did Hermione's behaviour), but there must be more to it if we take their behaviour as canon.
Other than that, you wrote quite a good one-shot. |
Author Feedback: Thanks. I had a hard time reading/dealing with Harry & Ginny in book 6 (read those parts really quickly) and I just don't know what to make of it. It seemed to come from out of the blue. I appreciate your comments! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/09/05
Not bad. I like this. Good job. I enjoy stories like these. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/09/05
Don't be shy or timid. I liked it. I think it is very true that Harry doesn't realize the importance of HR in his life. You depicted that well. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/09/05
I liked it. Interesting perspective; I liked the parallel with the "silly girl". |
Author Feedback: Thanks. I felt the "silly girl" part tied in well and that Hermione's character (from books 1-5) would totally have stepped in front of Harry to save him. Let's hope our Hermione returns in JKR's book 7! |
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