Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I love that they, in a way, marked Ron's bed
I liked that you actually had them speak to each other as well... even just the little things like him telling her to let go... I just feel like that added to the reality of it.
I look forward to reading more of your stories.
-Michelle

well... who said that Hagrid cant speak good things hehehe
I like the way you wirte the dialogues...makes them look so real

I love it and I love Hagrid's quote I notice you put it in a couple of your stories... it's a good quote
you're a good author
keep it up
-megz-

Perfect. Simply amazing. Can't say anything else other than that.

"The blinders are off now, the delusions gone. Whatever happens will happen, and they'll take it as it comes."

Loved you ending this story like this, by the way.

I think I can be honest when I say, you are the best smut author in portkey and definetly one of the best over all.

This was a very intense read! I loved it! Fantastic work!!!

I really liked the pacing and chasteness of the beginning of the story, but I get thrown when details (cunt espically)suddenly became much racier and incongruous to who I thought the charcters were in the beginning of the fic. Not that you write bad smut- not at all! It just seemed like the smut and the plotting/setup before it were two different stories-- good in their own seperate ways and enjoyable, but incongruous as a whole when juxtaposed. I can't wait to read more of your work! Keep it up!

I loved the part with Harry's wand inside of Hermione. It was the first time I'd ever read a fanfic with Harry using his wand like that in Hermione.

But then I thought...

OMGWTF! THAT WAND HAS BEEN INSIDE A TROLL'S NOSE!! xD!!!

Oh man, I'm really cracking up. But anywobbles, I loved this story. Keep up the good work =)

Oh, now I remember why I did not leave a review when I read this much earlier. It's the R/Hr sex factor. It was just not believable. Book 6 never says they even say they are in love with each other. Never. And not one kiss even between them. Just that comforting hug during Dumbledore's funeral.

And for Hermione to question that perhaps she's not good enough for Ron, or did something wrong, again, not believable. She's the one who could psychoanalyse everybody's feelings, and Ron's the one with the emotional range of a teaspoon.

Plus, she's the brightest witch of the time, remember? That's why when she got an E and not an O in DADA for OWL, I thought JKR contradicted herself in canon. Even though Harry is supposed to be better than her in DADA, why shouldn't she get an O in it, the same grade as Harry? In fact, all DA members should get O because Harry taught them things way beyond OWL level.

And Hermione could do the Protean charm, couldn't she? And in OOTP JKR said that's NEWT level, higher than OWL.

In fact, the whole JKR's R/Hr canon in Book 6 was not believable. They are believable only as bickering best friends. So to translate that into sexual relationship, at this point in time, is not believable. I'll repeat that again: At this point in time. However, that could change only if more suggestive indication is written about R/Hr in Book 7, which is not here yet. But I sure hope not.

In fact, in the realm of canon unbelievability, I think it is more believable if Harry were to be depicted as having had some shagging with Ginny (though, ewwww, I would hate that, too). This is because in canon, Ginny is certainly less chaste than Hermione. With her flaming hair, Ginny could fit in the 'scarlet woman' physical imagery already.

Having said that, I think you save yourself nicely at the end. Always, H/Hr is always the best.

And I will continue to sail this ship as long as people like you keep feeding us delusional shipmates wonderful H/Hr fan fictions.

This is not a flame. Still love reading your story. And the H/Hr bedroom scene is steamy!!!

Wow. Awesome fic It's got this great storyline about what love really is with great descriptive parts. I love how you fixed up the crapola pairings that came in HBP!

that was really sweet and good im off to read your other story now

aww, i liked that! it was cute and sensual and sexual and hott. good job, good one shot, write another when you get a chance

That was great! I totally loved it! That was some damn good smutty fluff. A pleasure to read, really. As I came to the end of the fic I had a silly grin, from ear to ear across my face. You also managed to lift my spirit, thanks!

Hey!The story is super cool!I hope you keep on writting stories like this one!I will post my stories soon and then,I hope you read and review them...

Kisses n hugs,
Joanne

This was amazing! Loved it to death! It was so adorable and well written! Very well done! Keep up the fabulous writing!