Awesome, I really liked it. Your like an awesome writer and I can’t wait for you to write more so write more soon and I would greatly appreciate it. Please write more soon… please please please please please I really really really really really really (do you think I have enough really’s?) liked it!!!

Good story! I love that song, too, though I had no idea it was done by someone other than John Michael Montgomery (country singer). Keep up the good work!

This is SOOOOO good! You need to post some more soon! I am sooo adding this to my favorites list now! You did a wonderful job so far! Keep it up!

Nice, very nice..Who am I kiddin'? Little tugs on my heasrt strings, thats what they are ya know. Kinda like the feelin' I got when the three of them were with me, watchin' Norbert hatchin' Or the look on Harry's face when he knew I wasn't jokin' with him about being a wizard. (Like them Dursleys had it in em to pull any prank, let alone a good one.) You just keep writin, don't worry 'bout your U-NO-Eat, just stay away from Molly, as yer know she will think yer too thin. Send me an owl if yer need me,

I loved the fluff! Well done and very.. well.. fluffy. I even like the song. Great work and can't wait to see the other three parts.

Pretty cool so far. I think i like it! I hope your a quick updater!

Nice, very nice!! Love fluff... I love the denial to the confusion to the acceptance. Boy, people can be so blind sometimes... it makes for such great writing!

Keep it up! Lovely story so far...

Awww, that just made my day! *giggles* It's just so sweet.

That was so good. I love it. And hey, good luck on the whole diet thing. Can't wait for the next chapter!

It will do you good (something to distract you from your hunger pangs) to continue with this story--knowing that you are bringing pleasure to others. Please, don't deny yourself. Write more now!

One of the sweetest plot bunny, PWP, fuzzy stories I have ever read! So romantic and cute! You are able to bring the images of them to life so easily!

update update update!!!!! and since i have to have ten words blah blah blah!

Not a bad start.
I do prefer interaction and dialogue though.

I hope there's going to be some of that later on.